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The Zone

December 31, 2011
By artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Sleepless nights, tight nights
Hours awake and no sleep I can bake
To me it’s just a lake
The return of the pale

Every year
I hear the same breeze
I see the same dreams
I feel the same scene

And also the thought is not gone
I know this is low thinking
That someday my mind will blow away
And flow to the north
But it’s okay
Because I’ll be graved in my favourite zone

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on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:55 pm SILVER, El Cajon, California
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The supreme prayer of my heart is not to be learned, rich, famous, powerful, or good, but simply to be radiant. I desire to radiate health, cheerfulness, calm courage, and good will. I wish to live without hate, whim, jealousy, envy, fear. I wish to be simple, honest, frank, natural, clean in mind and clean in body, unaffected - as ready to say I do not know, if it be so, and to meet all men on an absolute equality - to face any obstacle and meet every difficulty unabashed and unafraid.
I wish others to live their lives, too - up to their highest, fullest, and best. To that end I pray that I may never meddle, interfere, dictate, give advice that is not wanted, or assist when my services are not needed. If I can help people, I'll do it by giving them a chance to help themselves; and if I can uplift or inspire, let it be by example, inference, and suggestion, rather than by injunction and dictation. That is to say, I desire to be radiant - to radiate life.
-Elbert Hubbard

i really like it.. its very descriptive

on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:21 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I like it. It's airy and feels like a breeze. Nice

schristensen said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 6:59 pm
schristensen, Coden, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
be you not your neighbor

it made me feel like i was the one involved good job

haley854 GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 6:56 pm
haley854 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Who are you to judge me. im not perfect and i dont claim to be but before you start pointing fingers make sure your own hands are clean."-unknown

i really like it. were you trying to rhyme? becausse if you were i feel like you should contiune you that throughout the entire poem. otherwise very nice!

on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:40 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

i love this one... i felt it. pleasure reading it :)

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:43 pm
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Amazing. This really took me away from my life for a moment.. And that's what everyone wants nowadays, right? Beautifully written, and to the point. 5/5!! Keep up the awesome work!! :D

on Jan. 3 2012 at 8:59 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments
tnx very much

on Jan. 3 2012 at 8:58 pm
InvisibleHeart GOLD, Barony, Other
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Beautiful. Your words are simply graceful. I feel as if I just traveled to your zone. I like it very much. Keep writing. ;)

on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:19 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments
tnx, it took me 3 weeks to put it together, but i wrote it in 5 min. lol

on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:16 pm
Pngsaxin BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Writing is awesome:)

Awesome! This poem really really speaks to me!