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see you

October 14, 2010
By lanaC SILVER, Clutchin, Connecticut
lanaC SILVER, Clutchin, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Writing cannot be critiqued by others, for it is expression of the self; an outsider can only reflect upon it".

Our cheeks so close together – I couldn’t even tell whose tears were whose
The overwhelming warmth and comfort I felt in your arms was gentler than ever
The cold bed sheets,
The shivery air-
I’ll miss that.
We stared into each other, as usual, but with puffy faces-
Our passion being torn a part
he needed to latch onto me, he needed to hug me harder, he wasn’t letting go
I didn’t want to let go either,
I refused to
I couldn’t feel my face; I couldn’t even feel my body
I only felt myself-
rage and love overflowing inside me.
…I want to be there again,
I would do anything to be there again.

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on Dec. 15 2011 at 7:07 pm
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the bully isn’t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy

This is really good.! I love the emotion behind it. Keep writing.