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My Modern Fairytale

April 8, 2010
By WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.


You called me to say hello on Saturday morning
I woke from my slumber when I heard the phone ring
I was Sleeping Beauty.
You held my shoes for me as I put them on at homecoming
I had previously taken them off so we could dance
I was Cinderella.
You picked me up and carried me out to the car
I held onto you and enjoyed the ride
I was Snow White.



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on Oct. 13 2010 at 5:40 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

aw this is so cute(:

on Sep. 28 2010 at 10:46 am
SuicidalDreamer.. PLATINUM, Marshall, Illinois
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Drop The World....." Or "Everything Happens For A Reason....." Or "I am jealous of every woman that has ever hugged him, Cause for that mere second. They held my entire world."

Normally I don't like poetry like this but.....In this case I do o.o.....Soooo.....REAL good job....It actually made me smile a bit xD

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on Sep. 23 2010 at 12:42 pm
jlw11 SILVER, Fayette, Alabama
5 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only things in life you regret, are the risks that you never take."

Aw! This was so cute! I really enjoyed it!!! (:

on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:47 pm
beautifuldisaster18, Arlington, Texas
0 articles 1 photo 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep your feet on the ground, When your head's in the clouds.

This is so cute! I love it!

on Jul. 21 2010 at 10:30 am
writerinfinity PLATINUM, Arlington, Texas
35 articles 0 photos 105 comments
oh, well then i could see the smile on ur face

on Jul. 20 2010 at 11:33 am
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

What do you mean "her"? I was the girl that all of this was happening to.

on Jul. 20 2010 at 10:08 am
writerinfinity PLATINUM, Arlington, Texas
35 articles 0 photos 105 comments

good job keep writing u can just see the smile on her face when that was all happening

 


on Jul. 12 2010 at 11:06 am
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Thanks. I honestly thought this poem was a bit cheesy, so it's nice that at least someone likes it. haha

on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:48 am
alenkaaa BRONZE, Battle Ground, Washington
2 articles 2 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm falling apart, I'm barely breathing. With a broken heart. Thats still beating...

really cutee!