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you didn't love me

February 18, 2010
By darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:

The darkness crashes over me
Like a wave against the sea
It turns my heart cold as ice
As it turns to stone before me

My heart can’t beat another minute
You just sent me to my death sinit
This poisonous pain as I slit my vein
Has become my pleaser

My thoughts have turned dark and mysterious
When I said I wanted to die I was being serious
But you just wouldn’t believe me

But now that you found my body on the floor
Pools of blood around me as you walk through the door
You were stunned by what I’ve done
Because you believed I wouldn’t do it

But really there was nothing to it
You hold my lifeless body to you tight
You sit there holding it through the night
You pry my hand and take the knife
If only you would have done that to save my life

Now that I’m gone do you see
The pain you really caused me
You drove me right to my death
And before I took my last breath

I knew you would move on with your life
And find another to be your future wife
Neither in heaven nor hell will I wait
I’ll be a lost soul because of my fate
I will be lost for eternity
And it’s all cause you didn’t love me

The author's comments:
i was upset after a breakup.

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on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:35 pm
real_as_can_be101 PLATINUM, Mustang, Oklahoma
23 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can love and hate, but which is more irrate? -unknown

were you dating a guy or a girl? ill explain why i have this question after you answer, there's a confusing part of this poem. I love it!