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Imaginary

January 13, 2010
By Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene


Farther than the eye can see is the sky still blue?
Above all the chaos and fiery fires all I see is you.

Deeper than the farthest space I cannot say my love,
For words are only imaginary like a black unicorn or a purple dove.

So instead of only imagining we write our words of truth,
We put them down on paper like I have for you.


The author's comments:
it was inspired by by my first and only true love.

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Laina SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 3:00 pm
Laina SILVER, Port Hardy B.C., Other
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I love it! PLEASE keep writing, i want to read more!

on Apr. 2 2010 at 10:49 pm
Colorful4u SILVER, Orange, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around."
-Leo Buscagilia

Such creativity, I loved it. Please keep producing wonderful poetry (:

brianj BRONZE said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 12:13 pm
brianj BRONZE, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
3 articles 10 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the real trouble with reality is that there's no background music"
"i don't suffer from insanity. i enjoy every minute of it."
“Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness that most frightens us. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be?” -Marianne Williamson. Trying so hard to believe this but SO not succeeding…..

thank god, i'm not alone. yeah......i go fifty topics an hour......and that's why i like teen ink, it's not like they're going to kill me for babbling. lol. ha ha PIZAZZ. brings a smile to my depressed face every time :)

on Feb. 27 2010 at 1:00 am
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

I really like the imagery here! Great Job

alyssa:)) said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 6:59 pm
this is really good!!!! thx for commenting on my article!!

on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:06 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

lol!! wats really ironic is that its my fav word. i love typing PIZAZZ. its very entertaining. and dont worry bout the babbling part, thats all i do sometimes. half the time ppl r talking to me and ill go in and out of my own little world. but dont worry, they dont kno me there. its awsome. lol! pizazz!!!!

on Feb. 26 2010 at 11:37 am
Kaylamic SILVER, Glenbeulah, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments
i like this its cute :D

brianj BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 11:34 am
brianj BRONZE, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
3 articles 10 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the real trouble with reality is that there's no background music"
"i don't suffer from insanity. i enjoy every minute of it."
“Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness that most frightens us. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be?” -Marianne Williamson. Trying so hard to believe this but SO not succeeding…..

this is like a love note with PIZAZZ!!! it's beautiful. i really like how you captured it....and it has PIZAZZ!!! ha ha sorry i really love typin that word in all caps....it's my weakness....i'm sorry now i'm just babbling.......well seriously i loved it :) (one last time) PIZAZZ!!! okay i'm done now....

Pillow BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 11:17 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
1 article 5 photos 300 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing says oops like a wall of flame.

I like it. It's pretty.


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