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A Hearts Clock

January 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


I've been counting every hour
That I haven't seen your face
You are now the cause
Of every tear I waste

I hide it with fake laughter
A lie in every smile
Every second I wonder why
It's been such a long while

The weeks go crawling by
I long to hold you close
I'm starving for your love
And withering like a rose

It seems like forever
Yet I guess I'll wait
For I'll always want you
And that shall be my fate



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on Oct. 21 2010 at 9:59 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanks for the comments and ratings. I totally understand

on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:43 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
20 articles 9 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The unexamined life is not worth living." ~Socrates

I can definitely relate. I moved away from the guy I liked, and this poem reminds me exactly of how i feel

on Aug. 25 2010 at 9:23 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanks for the comments and ratings everyone you made my day:)

on Aug. 23 2010 at 10:34 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I do love the rhyming scheme captain.and i love the title. and i love the concept. run on sentences-i know. do your dance. i love you captain.

on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:49 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 475 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

The burning of heartache and love brilliant!

riley... GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 1:39 pm
riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
13 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity." edgar allen poe.

maybe my favorite poem by you. a great combination of playful rhyme and deep messages. you have a lot of talent!!! :)

on Jul. 22 2010 at 10:57 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you:)

momo12 SILVER said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 8:27 pm
momo12 SILVER, Sebastopol, California
9 articles 3 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I Think Therefore I Am"

wow... im sorta blown away i really like this it has to be my favorite

on Jul. 17 2010 at 2:41 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

My head. . . sometimes when I'm tired ideas for poems or stories pop up and i write them down then fix them in the morning.

on Jul. 16 2010 at 7:32 am
yes_i_am SILVER, Faizabad, Other
6 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"not all those who wander are lost"

hey whr do u get such beautiful ideas?

on Jun. 30 2010 at 8:37 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you:)       

on Jun. 29 2010 at 6:42 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thanx so much:)

on Jun. 29 2010 at 6:29 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
6 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is golden...duct tape is silver" - a random T-shirt

You have rapped in a perfectly worded pakage what so many others feel -including me- you have a way by taking sadness, but not making it depressing you make it a statement.

Another one to be proud of :D


on Jun. 22 2010 at 8:08 pm
PrincessPineapple GOLD, Chesapeake, Virginia
18 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love someone is to learn the song that is in their heart, and sing it to them when they have forgotten." ~unknown

so sad! but really good!

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:36 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you it means alot to me:)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:32 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww beautiful!!! it flows wonderfully altogether and its romanticly put!! excellentt:)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:18 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx:)                  

on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:41 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)

on Jun. 5 2010 at 1:20 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

Another lovely, true, engaging poem! My favorite so far!

on Jun. 3 2010 at 6:48 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

Ah. my mistake. Those are the two most popular, so it was more of an educated guess than anything.