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Too Lazy MAG

October 25, 2009
By RoseWhite SILVER, Valrico, Florida
RoseWhite SILVER, Valrico, Florida
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It is cold here,
On the floor,
Blank with
Goosebumps on my skin.
A patch of sun is
so close by.
Outside birds
sing “let me in.”
I think of all the things
I've done,
that blank spot
on the wall;
Moving now is
too much work
to bother getting
up at all.
Now sleep hangs
heavy on my
eyes. Soft nothing
draws me in.
This is why I
love weekends:
Lazy's not a sin.

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on Jun. 14 2010 at 11:19 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

very nice, i read different kinds of poems but this is freash and relaxing.

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on May. 2 2010 at 2:59 am
onlyiz, Boulder, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“You can't depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus.” - Mark Twain

haha it stings but you start out with such comforting flow i get why you're being lazy. i loved it. 

on Apr. 30 2010 at 9:27 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

awesome loved the line 'soft nothing draws me in' and the rhyme scheme. good work :)

on Feb. 7 2010 at 9:10 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac


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