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My girl

August 18, 2009
By hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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You are my inspiration with no expiration
You are my love from above

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This article has 6 comments.

E.Lee GOLD said...
on Sep. 1 2009 at 8:58 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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its cute!! i like it:D

on Sep. 1 2009 at 6:44 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

even though it's short, i think it has a lot of feeling and meaning :) i love it! great full of emotion! check out some of my work, and i will keep checking out yours :)

on Aug. 31 2009 at 10:19 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I love the fact that with so little words you use in this piece can reflect a meaning rather than a piece that uses a hundred words maybe to reflect.

on Aug. 31 2009 at 3:17 pm
cute :) nice rhyming

on Aug. 29 2009 at 3:38 pm
unearthlyhaphazard GOLD, N/A, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"There are three rules for writing the novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are."~W. Somerset Maugham

It's cute, but I suggest expanding it, to give it more depth.

on Aug. 27 2009 at 10:55 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Short, sweet, and to the point... nice. Keep it up!