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forgive me

August 21, 2009
By blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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can you forgive me
for letting go of hand
releasing you
when you were all I had
you were my world
my life
my all
why did I just sit there
and let it fall
let it fall
like a piece of paper
little did you know
you were actually my savior
save me from my misery
took me up into new company
finally made me feel ok
keep all my depressing thoughts at bay
thought maybe I got it right
never felt the urge to fight or yell at you
I was your fool
just in love
then it all feel apart
that’s when the yelling had to start
the repressed anger
held back for so long
let it out
like a beautiful song
the chorus were curses to you
cursing that I was a fool
I finally came to the final verse
felt like I was dying
cause I knew part of me was lying
and it all ended
all of sudden
all my feelings no longer hidden
I felt vulnerable but free
finally able to be me
so please
forgive me
let old feelings be
cause I know you still love me

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on May. 23 2010 at 7:24 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow i love this great poem!!!