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Remebering You (snowflaks)

July 19, 2009
By RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way
Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

The snowflaks fall on my nose and eyelashes.
They fall like the rose petals of spring.
The rose petals you gave to me when you were mine.
But now winter has come and you are gone.
No more sun, no more laughter, no more rose petels.
They were replaced by clowds, my sorrow and snowflaks.
This winter seems so much colder without you.
I sit waiting for the snow to melt, the ice to go and you to come back.
But that will not be for the longest time.
So I'll wait whill the snowflaks fall on my nose and eyelashes.

The author's comments:
This was another school assignment. It was ment to be a pome about spring but i twisted the longing for spring whan its snowing. Enjoy

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on Aug. 17 2009 at 1:02 pm
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"

wow this is truly magnificent, you should definitely keep writing more poems.

on Aug. 10 2009 at 10:20 pm
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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wow. its beautiful. loved it