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Heaven or Hell

July 6, 2009
By dawni BRONZE, Mt. Sterling, Ohio
dawni BRONZE, Mt. Sterling, Ohio
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The diference is unspoken,
One better than the other.
My lies cover my truth,
Trying hard not to harm another.

I run from my pain,
Covering the trail I leave behind.
I hide from the ones that love me,
So they don't find out i've lied.

Having not found trust,
I am unable to be trusted.
Telling the truth may be hard,
But I really must.

The uncertainess is harming,
But you do what you have to.
Knowing you may hate me,
Is what I should recieve
for lieing to you.

Should I say I'm sorry,
Or tell you another lie.
If you tell me to leave you alone,
should I break down and cry.

If I should die this very day,
Where would I go Heaven or Hell.
I may have fixed my wrongs,
but i'm still not in the right mind to tell.

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on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:36 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

this is really really great. the 5th and 6th verses were my favorite:) great job!!

i'd love it if you (or anyone else reading this) would check out my work and see what you think. Especially my poem 'Torturer of a King.' I'd appriciate it!

on Mar. 3 2010 at 5:26 pm
HannahJane SILVER, Woodbrige, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
-Maybe its not my weekend but its gunna be my year-


on Mar. 3 2010 at 3:28 pm
Collado92 PLATINUM, Ft.pierce, Florida
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Nicely put, i like this, its good =)

on Mar. 3 2010 at 3:19 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

in luvvv this!! the rhyming @ the end makes it all the more deep. plz keep writing!!

on Sep. 23 2009 at 4:38 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

wow this is true!

on Jul. 20 2009 at 7:45 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I really do like this! It is emotion-filled and true.