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Jonquils

December 14, 2023
By Shadowwalker414 BRONZE, Cape Carteret, North Carolina
Shadowwalker414 BRONZE, Cape Carteret, North Carolina
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A boy holds a handful of Jonquils.

Standing over the grave 

of that which he loved.

He’s been stoic for too long, he lets the tears flow.

A white egret orchid, 

a gentle breeze.

Best friend by his side, 

but he wishes 

she could be there too.

The life he took from her, 

the happiness he’s taken from everyone.

He looks down at his pale, thin body.

And promises to live the life 

he accidentally took from her.


The author's comments:

Paintchip poetry! Originally 'a boy' was Sunny, and 'best friend' was 'flower boy' because this was inspired by Omori!


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