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June 27, 2009
By ProdigalDaughter SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
ProdigalDaughter SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
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As I sit here on this Word Document,
65 photos attempt to upload.
“One percent done.”
I might as well go grab some coffee.

I’m back now.
I met the nicest man while grabbing coffee.
Oop, just a moment.
The phone is ringing.
“Five percent done.”

It was the nice man!
We’re going to grab a bite.

Back now.
I am the nice man’s girlfriend!
First I must break up with the old boyfriend.
Done and done.
And still only “Ten percent done.”
Might as well go to sleep.

Good morning.
“Forty percent done.”
I think I’ll look up my boyfriend on Google.

“Forty-two percent done.”
My boyfriend is the ambassador of Ecquador!
Oh just wait. He’s calling.
Lunch? Of course I’d love to.

“Fifty-eight percent done.”
He said it was love at first sight.
We’re getting married!
Must go plan for the wedding.

“One hundred percent done.”
Oh. These are all pictures of me and my ex.
Alt, Ctrl, Delete.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Jul. 12 2009 at 1:08 pm
Alexa Opalewski, West Allis, Wisconsin
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I liked the litle twist at the end, it was funny.

on Jul. 7 2009 at 3:02 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

Only thing I have to say

is it was better than O-Kay

I like this poem because it's real

and I know how you feel.

I like how you turned what could've been a story into a poem. My favorite was the "Alt, Ctrl, Delete"

I'll rate it a 5. Check out mhy poem called " I want To Fly Away" THAT'S GGGGREAT!!!