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7 Ways of Looking at a Man
Kristyn Dizon
7 Ways of Looking at a Man
I. His eyes were subtle and
a wonderful blue. I saw
pain that had been carved
through. The glow of his
halo was soon saddened by
a light he had never seen.
He looks sad.
II. Admiration seeped just below
his eyebrow. He stood on the
cement in the middle of town,
looking for something to peak his
interest. Hope and adventure
stared right at him. Observant,
is what he was.
III. His hands were rough but
they seemed to be softer
than the petals on flowers.
However, his fists were
red from playing bloody knuckles
with his closest buddies.
He seemed happy.
IV. His teeth were showing
more than usual. As he sat
in the middle of a room with
the people he thought were his
friends. Even though they
were only making amends.
He was clueless.
V. His eyes were bloodshot at
the sight of someone talking to
the girl he vowed his life for.
His teeth didn’t show for quite
sometime. That even I began
to worry. He was alone.
VI. His face was nearly swollen.
When his tears fell from
the inner corner of his
dazzling eyes. His head was
full of clouds. The thought
of ending everything occupied
his small mind. He was lost.
VII. The man sits on the blue
Picnic table closest to the
concession stand. He smiles
at the messy girl laughing
from the inside of the lightly
tinted glass. He is free.
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Hi, my name is Kristyn. This piece was actually inspired by 13 Ways of Looking at a Blackbird, by Wallace Stevens. Our school's creative writing teacher assigned this to us for our first piece in our poetry unit, and i just thought of publishing it with a positive community like TeenInk!