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The delicate ,high pitched voice

May 11, 2009
By MargaritaAlely BRONZE, Emporia, Kansas
MargaritaAlely BRONZE, Emporia, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
" So whoever you are and whover Iam, you made it alright to be me"

It's living and breathing in air
I hear it's heartbeat thump, thump, thump
echoing through the plains, throught the mountains and the deserts
It speaks to me, telling me to come near I love its voice, breathtaking and heartbreaking
and then Iam there feeling the water move through my fingers
Iam hypnotized by its beautiful voice
I keep walking toward the blue endless sea
and in a snap of a finger
Iam lost in the water
it tangles me and dosen't let me go
I try to breathe but i can't Iam falling, falling, and in a sudden
I realize its too late
all sounds are now deadly asleep

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This article has 2 comments.

gijoe said...
on May. 20 2009 at 12:51 am
Great Job. Breath is to life and without their is Death...AWESOME..

on May. 20 2009 at 12:48 am
Nice work. Very deep. I think its about losing yourself in something pracious or beautiful.