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Like a Phoenix, I Rise

May 6, 2019
By camimouney BRONZE, Metairie, Louisiana
camimouney BRONZE, Metairie, Louisiana
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You appeared out of nowhere

And felt just like a nightmare.

It was clear you were not a friend,

But I tried and tried to pretend.


Before I even got out of bed,

Your voice was yelling inside my head.

I heard you everywhere I went

And listened to all your comments.


I changed myself completely for you.

I was like a toy, brand-new.

But finally, I had had enough.

I told you it was time to give up.


I fought you long and hard

Until you were no more.

Although you left me scarred,

I learned to love myself more.


Self-hate, you were like a laser beam

trying to destroy my self-esteem.

But now, I am stronger

And you will haunt me no longer.


The author's comments:

I wrote this for an English project. It mimics Emily Dickinson's "Because I could not Stop for Death."


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