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ALL ALONE

May 2, 2014
By crissy143 BRONZE, New York, New York
crissy143 BRONZE, New York, New York
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There was an alley with nothing but garbage cans on both sides of the wall.Graffiti art of different colors drawn od the brick walls .Birds walking around pecking food and rats running around in broad light .It wasa busy night ,cars beeping there horns at one another for whatever reason.The sound of the ambulance blasting the streets with their sirens .None of these noises bothered thew couple who has just left out a restaurant and are ready to headhome and end there night with a romantic movie .The route they they ususally take is the longest way ,since it was already late Jaylen knew a short cut.

"I know a quicker waywe can get home ". suggested Jaylen .

Ashley didnt care so she just followed him.Once they finally got to the alley ,Ashley noticed thatthe lights were flickering off and on,sounds of water dripping in some type of rhythm .Out of nowhere a guy screams,Ashley hold Jaylen hand tightly cause she is scared now .
"What was that?!?" Ashley asked

"Im not sure but we need to leave this alley now !" suggest Jaylen

"HELP PLEASE HELP!!!!"

Jaylen stopped and thought if he should go back and see if someone is there or should he just leave .

"Ashley go home i will be there in a few dont worry honey i will be fine " Jaylen shouts to Ashley who was nearly in tears

Jaylen speed walks into to alley and there he see a young boy who about in his teens around 17 or 18 leaning against the wall with his white shirt all cut up and covered in blood.

"Are you okay?" Jaylen ask very nervouly

"Ive be stabbed please get help i dont want to die" replied the poor teen who was bleeding to death.

Jaylen called 911 as fast as he could and the ambulance and police arrived about 10 mins after.They took thepoor boy in the back of the ambulance and Jaylen was left with cops and detectives for questioning


The author's comments:
This piece was base on a picture of an alley my creative writing teacher showed and the class had to put there own vision into the picture

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