Fallen | Teen Ink


October 15, 2011
By Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
Hbaff GOLD, MErrimack, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Maybe if i stare he'll come faster.

His beauty was blinding as he smiled at her. His eyes were like a puddle she was drowning in. His laugh chimed in the open air and his lips formed words that she was only half listening to. The light that shone in her eyes was noticeable and the smile on her face was caused by him and him only.

She hadn’t meant for any of this to happen but in a heart beat he had her in his trap. She knew that he would never feel the way she had for him but she hoped. And she clung onto that hope like it was her own life.

Her heart had fallen deep and it had no way of climbing out.

The author's comments:
This was for an anonymous boy who doesn't know i wrote this about him. I hope you can understand how deeply fallen I was.

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byebye said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 4:59 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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Reading a relationship type poem usually leaves me feeling a little....blahh. But I really liked this one; the imagery, word usage, and flow were really there. Great work! :)

on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:19 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

i can see how deeply fallen in love you were.  amazingg<3

on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:31 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I like it. Its cute the way you describe love at first sight. I love it lots