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The Finding

October 7, 2009
By Ali.B GOLD, Lexington, North Carolina
Ali.B GOLD, Lexington, North Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write whatever flows from my fingers- AJY

The prince rushed into the room so fast he nearly took the door off its hinges. He found what he had feared. His new wife, the only one he had ever loved lying dead. Her scarlet blood soaking into the pink upholstry of the chair she had gotten only the day before. He sank onto his knees beside her. He choked out a sob. Tears ran out of his eyes and onto the dress of his bride's corpse. In his mind he saw her agreeing to marry him, saying "I do", then dancing with him and whispering "I love you" in his ear. Anouther sob ripped through his body. Just then the rest of the royal court, that he had left behind, ran in. The only sounds in the room where the prince's cries and the gasps of the court.

The author's comments:
nothing in particualr inspired me to write just kind of came to me.

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This article has 4 comments.

Sussie QQQQ said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 1:07 pm
Deep, depressing, and insanly gorgious. Write, write, write Deary because you have talent, you have puzazz, and you would bleed beautiful words! Post what you write because it will dominate one day and be published for us all to read.

on Mar. 7 2010 at 6:49 am
JustWriting BRONZE, Sao Paulo, Other
1 article 0 photos 31 comments
VEERRY good, you have talent, keep on


on Nov. 10 2009 at 11:36 am
EternityBroken GOLD, Hooker, Oklahoma
17 articles 2 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is impossible to love and be wise.

it is very interesting in a depressing kind of way lol way to go!!

Friar Tuck said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 9:33 pm
Very good, very good.