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Love is a Many Splendid Thing

September 30, 2009
By freedombird GOLD, Staten Island, New York
freedombird GOLD, Staten Island, New York
10 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
your favorite color is the one that looks best on you


He knelt down below me. His twinkling brown eyes glimmered at my teary face. He had slipped a small velvet box out his coat pocket. My cheeks grew warm. My hazel eyes sprouted tears. Tears of joy of course. He opened the tiny box revealing a small but beautiful ring. Although not the traditional diamond nor crystal, it was still a beautiful topaz. "YES!" i shreiked before he could even ask the question. He stood up dusing off his Brown coudoroy pants. He pcked me up gracefully and he hugged me tight with great strength. He kissed me passionatley. That night we were just ourselves. He was nt a Royal, Rule-following prince and i was not a dutchesses daughter. We were silly goof-balls stuck in iternal love. My mother would always and i quote say "You will be married off not for love but for keeping our family's wealth alive." and as usual i would roll my eyes. I was young and i needed to live my life to the fullest.I leaned on him for comfort. He stroked my hair as we glanced at all the stars up in the midnight sky. The small stars seemed to be winking at us as if happy that he proposed.I guess we were right i may quote " Love is a many splendid thing"


The author's comments:
Noinspration needed.... it just comes to me.

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on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:59 am
UnspokenWords21 SILVER, Shelbyville, Illinois
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Giving up doesn't mean you're weak...it means you are strong enough to let go...

I'm loving the whole romeo and juliet vibe. Keep it up!!

on Dec. 18 2010 at 1:08 pm
freedombird GOLD, Staten Island, New York
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your favorite color is the one that looks best on you

love you shrien!!! thanks!! see u monday

on Dec. 18 2010 at 12:39 pm
Shrien PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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"When one door closes, another one opens"

Hey (:

That was great! Imma see if u have more! (: KEEP WRITING <3


on Oct. 15 2009 at 6:50 pm
freedombird GOLD, Staten Island, New York
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your favorite color is the one that looks best on you

gracias, im so happy to be getting poitive uplifting comments. please read more as they get approved!!! i have like 5 stories waiting to get approved!!! again,thanks!!!!!

on Oct. 15 2009 at 3:02 pm
HarryPotterFan09 SILVER, China, Maine
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Harry Potter: "This is night, Diddykins. That's what we call it when it goes all dark like this."

To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.-Unknown

Laundry is the only thing that should be sorted by color.-Unknown

VERY cute :)

on Oct. 15 2009 at 10:36 am
Madeline PLATINUM, Lake View Terrace, California
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If you always see the positive, you'll never see the negative.

That was so sweet.