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Secret

September 26, 2009
By EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide


“The way I see it, you have two choices.” He said declaratively “you can kiss me, He moved closer, or you can walk away and go your whole life wondering how it would be.” She smiled lightly and took a step toward him.
“The way I see it…” He waited “is that your right.” He was so close to her suddenly that her heart began to sputter and her blood boiled violently. She couldn’t keep her thoughts to herself and that intrigued him immensely.
“Your adorable cleare, you know I will never let you have the satisfaction of knowing how it is to be without me.” He smiled again and put his hands on both sides of her face, bending down to kiss her. The kiss started off normal the way a kiss normally does when it’s the first, but once she met his lips with hers she couldn’t help but take a breath and that drove him wild. He pulled her toward him swiftly and they were molded into each other. There was so much heat, so much passion that the air around them got hot and muggy though it was the middle of winter in the little Chicago town. He let her go and held her an inch away from him. Her eyes were glowing and he could tell she wanted nothing more than to stay with him as long as she could.
“I really wish you wouldn’t read my mind Jake” she breathed. “It’s intimidating.”
Cleare and Jake had known each other since 4th grade and ever since then they had been inseparable and together. Now it was junior year and they could no longer resist the temptation between them, But Jake had a secret. A secret worse than that of what Cleare knew. She loved him so much and he loved her, but will this secret rip them apart?



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on Mar. 13 2011 at 5:31 pm
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide

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on Feb. 26 2011 at 8:57 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

I really like this.

"You know I will never let you have the satisfaction of knowing what it's like to be without me."

I llove that, it's so adorable. It reminded me of a guy I know. This is really cute(:

 


on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:19 pm
Mortie PLATINUM, Oak Run, California
31 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whats The Point?

that was WAY good!!! you should deffinatly write more!!!

krzykrys GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 3:33 pm
krzykrys GOLD, Baldwinsville, New York
15 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have many favorite quotes

 i think this story is really good but it reminds me of twilight you should write more though.

on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:15 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
225 articles 4 photos 240 comments

I LURV IT!

MORE MORE MORE!

WHAT HAPPENS?!

WHATS THE SECRET?!

 

Check my story : Please Stay and Leave a comment plz!


on Aug. 19 2010 at 9:46 pm
HippieNamedAnna PLATINUM, Kansas City, Missouri
21 articles 7 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let It Be-The Beatles
Music is the only thing that makes sense any more-Me
Make love, not war-a bunch of people
Roses are red, Violets are blue, I have five fingers, The middle one's for you-Me :)

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! whats the seceret????

hrf1434 GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 8:56 pm
hrf1434 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
10 articles 4 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge a Girl by Her Cover

I love it wright more, write more, write more

on Jul. 28 2010 at 10:35 pm
LaurenC PLATINUM, Dearborn, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every man dies, but not every man lives".

A very good piece of writing. I'd work on a few grammar and punctuation  mistakes. Other than that, it was an enjoyable piece!

on Jul. 6 2010 at 10:56 pm
LostInStereo PLATINUM, Phoenixville, Pennsylvania
26 articles 3 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friends are the family you choose.

It's adorable! i want to keep reading, pleasee keep writing!

on Jul. 6 2010 at 7:36 pm
darklylight26 GOLD, Lilybell, California
12 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have to be lost in order to be found.

It was well-written but bit abrupt. Jumping and confusing. The plot is good though. and I hope you add more.

Also add a bit more description.


on Jun. 14 2010 at 11:06 am
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

and check out some of my work too if you dont mind :)

on Jun. 14 2010 at 11:06 am
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

that was rreeaallllyy good :) i was hanging off of your every word!! more please!!

on Jun. 14 2010 at 6:19 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

This was really great PLEASE write more!

Anyone who sees this, will you please check out my work and comment on it?


on May. 23 2010 at 3:18 pm
weebnini DIAMOND, San Diego, California
55 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Done & Over"

"Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that's true strength."

"People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth."

awww~ too cute~! write more plz:) oh and nice cliff hanger LOL:(

on May. 23 2010 at 2:18 pm
My.Heart.Is.Yours BRONZE, L.A, California
3 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't know who invented high heels, but all women owe him a lot.
-Marilyn Monroe

Omgg!This is frikken Amazingg!Keep writing and finish this damn story!

chocoococo said...
on May. 23 2010 at 1:01 pm
v. cute!!! just work and grammar and stuff and u've got a goody :)

on May. 23 2010 at 12:59 pm
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
41 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you can never let yourself fall you'll never know what it's like to love

i need more what's his secret????? please write a second part

Radiogirl247 said...
on May. 13 2010 at 5:23 pm
Radiogirl247, The Woodlands, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
You dont stop playing because you get old. You get old because you stop playing.

Noo!!! Don't leave us hanging!!! :(

on May. 6 2010 at 1:12 pm
EmelineM. BRONZE, Lake Mary, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

I think you should post the second oneeee, this is greattt !

and when you do post it make suree to send me the link pleasee,

i really enjoyed it. (:


on Apr. 9 2010 at 7:36 am
CardinalRunner BRONZE, Holland, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 42 comments
Oooo this is cute! I loved it! I like how he told her to kiss him, thats adorable!