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Pain

November 10, 2022
By LoganMPartridge SILVER, Cupertino, California
LoganMPartridge SILVER, Cupertino, California
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Whoosh! My skis carve into the soft and fluffy snow. I was flying down the beautiful mountain with my legs burning from the strain of skiing late in the day. I felt free and wild. I feel incredible like I could achieve anything. Then I feel a sharp pain in my leg and I realize my ski is stuck. Time seems to freeze and I fly down the mountain not stopping for my stuck ski. I spin out of control and suddenly there is no ground beneath me. I fly through the air spinning and flailing. Crunch! I hear as my leg hits the ground. The bone splintered and shattered. I try to scream but there is nothing coming out. My veins tear and seem to be just bit through by a Great White Shark. Then my chest slams against the ground that doesn’t feel so soft anymore. My ribs crunch and It feels like a hot knife is sliding into my chest. I lay on the ground and seemed to drown In pain and suffering. I can’t feel anything any more.


The author's comments:

This is the Third part to my saga about emotions. 


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