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Sunset at Moonshire Lake

March 24, 2019
By Madison-Abigail-White BRONZE, Independence, Oregon
Madison-Abigail-White BRONZE, Independence, Oregon
2 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No other Success can compensate for failure in the home"


The Vanilla colored bolt sent a golden flash as it shreds through the sky it explodes in a burst of light Piercing the eye with blinding flashes. The lights dangle from the posts, the wood rotting and shredded in small areas. The sweet drip of the first rain hits my cheek as I stare up at the sky. The bittersweet taste of an early morning caresses every part of my mouth. I wish I could freeze time at this moment and live in it forever.



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on Apr. 6 2019 at 10:20 pm
Madison-Abigail-White BRONZE, Independence, Oregon
2 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No other Success can compensate for failure in the home"

thank you, I will try that!

P.S. you're my first comment...like EVER

on Apr. 2 2019 at 12:33 pm
starfeather PLATINUM, Olathe, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
AD ASTRA PER ASPERA- to the stars, through difficulties.

I think this piece might work better as a poem. Just a thought? Love the imagery though. :)


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