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James Schue and the Olympians; Chapter One

February 17, 2010
By JacobC GOLD, Belgium, Wisconsin
JacobC GOLD, Belgium, Wisconsin
10 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Am I indecisive? Well, yes and no." -Anonymous


“Help!” I screamed. I was running, but I didn’t know why. Something was wrong. Suddenly, there was a girl about 50 yards ahead of me.

“James!” she called to me. I ran for her. She looked familiar, but I couldn’t remember her name. Suddenly I started falling, like I had walked off a cliff, and I woke up.

“Are you okay, James?” my teacher, Ms. Crowe, asked. I looked around. I was in class, and lying on the floor. I guess I had fallen asleep again. The cliff part of my dream was from me falling out of my chair. I got up, and sat back in my seat.

“Come talk to me after class,” Ms. Crowe said. Probably another detention to add to my collection.

I managed to pretend to pay attention until the bell. I walked over to Ms. Crowe’s desk. She sighed, and started talking, “James, you’re going to fail my class if you don’t do better. Your grades have dropped ever since you started 6th grade. And with the year ending on Friday, you will have to do a lot of extra-credit in the next few days if you want to pass.”

I kept my eyes on the floor. I didn’t want to see her face, with a look of pity like all the other teachers had. The teachers who had given up on me.

“I’ll try harder,” I mumbled, and I walked out the door. I went in the general direction of my locker. Why am I such a screw-up? I asked myself. Lately my ADHD had gotten worse. I was also diagnosed with dyslexia a few weeks ago. I don’t know who I got that from, since my dad’s a writer and my mom’s a teacher.
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I got to my next class a minute late, so Mrs. Aello, the teacher, sent me to the office. Again. I got my third detention for this week, and it’s only Thursday. I was going for a school record.

Later, I decided to try and skip out of detention. I was sick of school, and I just wanted to go home. To get to my house, I would have to walk. I tried to get away on bus before, and the bus driver found out that I was supposed to be back at school. He had to go back and drop me off.

I walked out of school with a group of kids. The teachers are always outside, making sure that no one causes trouble. After we got past the teachers I broke off from the group. I sprinted out of the parking lot. I was almost home free, when Mrs. Aello saw me. I ran onto the street, just as her car flew out of the parking lot. I ran down the road, and then cut across a yard. I tried to run across the street, but I tripped over a pothole. As I got up, Mrs. Aello’s car came screaming around the corner. Instead of slowing down, she sped up! She smiled at me, a smile that was filled with evil, hatred, and every other negative emotion you can think of. I tried to move, but I was paralyzed with fear. She was about to hit me, and I was going to die. It wasn’t a maybe situation. Nobody could survive getting hit at that speed. She would probably drive over my body again; just to be sure I was dead.

The author's comments:
This is a continuation of Rick Riordan's Percy Jackson and the Olympians. This is set two years after The Last Olympian, and it has different main characters than the real books.

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Ms.Wild said...
on Nov. 20 2014 at 3:45 pm
Ms.Wild, St. Julian's, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Breathe, Smile and don't forget to love.

I love Percy Jackson!!! I love this!!! I MUST know what happens next! :)

on Jan. 29 2011 at 7:35 am
Selimile BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Night seems darker before the dawn."

Hey, this is a great story!  You really captured Rick Riordan's style.  I think AnneOnnimous is right, though.  Maybe you should try for a character who isn't exactly like Percy, just to change things up a bit.  But other than that, awesome story!  I'll be waiting for more.  :)



on Jun. 30 2010 at 10:36 am
EllaMcFarley BRONZE, Madison, Wisconsin
4 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See ya later, Herc, it's been a real slice." -Megera from Hercules (my avatar!)
"I can't turn left!" -Zoolander
"Someone get these mother f***ing snakes off this mother f***ing plane!" -Samuel L. Jackson in Snakes On a Plane (funniest movie ever)

Yaaay fanfic!! this was good, i like it :) I think you and me like the same books based on your other works. Maximum ride, percy jackson...do you like the golden compass?

on Feb. 25 2010 at 3:03 pm
AnneOnnimous BRONZE, Peterborough Ontario, Other
3 articles 0 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Saying 'I notice you're a nerd' is like saying, 'Hey, I notice that you'd rather be intelligent than be stupid, that you'd rather be thoughtful than be vapid, that you believe that there are things that matter more than the arrest record of Lindsay Lohan. Why is that?' In fact, it seems to me that most contemporary insults are pretty lame. Even 'lame' is kind of lame. Saying 'You're lame' is like saying 'You walk with a limp.' Yeah, whatever, so does 50 Cent, and he's done all right for himself."
— John Green

aw, I'm sorry that people have said worse things to you before!! You seem to be a good writer, so that's hardly fair. And as long as you don't intend to publish this, as 3/4 of people on Teen Ink would, then it's good. :)

JacobC GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 8:27 pm
JacobC GOLD, Belgium, Wisconsin
10 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Am I indecisive? Well, yes and no." -Anonymous

Thanks for the advice, but I'm not getting it published. and don't worry, people have said way worse things to me before.

on Feb. 24 2010 at 7:28 pm
AnneOnnimous BRONZE, Peterborough Ontario, Other
3 articles 0 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Saying 'I notice you're a nerd' is like saying, 'Hey, I notice that you'd rather be intelligent than be stupid, that you'd rather be thoughtful than be vapid, that you believe that there are things that matter more than the arrest record of Lindsay Lohan. Why is that?' In fact, it seems to me that most contemporary insults are pretty lame. Even 'lame' is kind of lame. Saying 'You're lame' is like saying 'You walk with a limp.' Yeah, whatever, so does 50 Cent, and he's done all right for himself."
— John Green

I love the lightning thief books!!!!!!!this story was good... its just that, not to be mean or anything, but you;d be better off writing your own story with your own characters, that way there's at least a chance that it could be successful and be published.

JacobC GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 4:44 pm
JacobC GOLD, Belgium, Wisconsin
10 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Am I indecisive? Well, yes and no." -Anonymous

It's my favorite book/series. The movie was also good.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 10:12 am
star_struck_93, Smithville, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
"Music speaks what cannot be expressed, soothes the mind and gives it rest, heals the heart and makes it whole, flows from heaven to the soul.”

I just got done reading Percy Jackson: The Lighting Thift yesterday. I loved it! It was a great book!