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The Door

May 19, 2016
By Bazzy2016 BRONZE, Colorado Springs, Colorado
Bazzy2016 BRONZE, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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So if you hate stories/novels that is the main character (me whom is talking) writing in a journal about their adventure then this is not for you. Anyway back to the story. It was an average day I got up out of the softest bed ever made but it was especially made for me because I have back problems, from all of my other adventures. After me complaining to my brother who I lived with ( in case you didn’t know I am 26 and I have my own place with my younger brother who is 19 so I am the dad pretty much but he is cool.)Once he finished explaining to me the reason I was complaining was because I didn’t want to get out of bed but I had work. Once I was done showering and getting ready for my job (I am a lawyer) my brother said you going on a date with that one girl no but you realize she is my girlfriend right? For a 19 year old you are very immature. I thought to myself. We challenged each other to a race downstairs for breakfast. READY SET GO!!!!!!!!!! As I heard go I started running as fast as I possibly could mainly because I was in track and my brother likes a challenge so why not. He is almost as fast as me but he still isn’t as fast as me though he forgot his glass with his medication which he needed so when he walked down the stairs slowly with his head down I had made pancakes and bacon. When he saw the breakfast he smiled because he loves bacon. I felt bad because he came down and said “I rolled my ankle.” I got him a bag of ice. For a 19 year old he can’t really take care of himself and acts like he way younger than he really is. 
Once we finished breakfast he had to go to school I graduated from college and I started college 2 years early once I graduated I became a detective who figured out crime and checked all the body cells and figure all of the advanced stuff, I only have another person who works there but he used to work there till he died by my parents murderer.  If you didn’t know we were about to go to a foster home but instead me and my brother were in the cop car that had flashing strobe lights and used those to our advantage we compressed the cop’s eyes on them he blew his ear piercing whistle and screeched get those kids me and my brother took off they let us off the hook.  They said they will crawl back to us sooner or later but we never did we ran to our Aunt Allison’s and uncle Daniel’s house. But today I decided to go up to my attic once I glanced over I noticed a door that was ruby red and full of satanic engravings.  I thought to myself for a little bit and said to myself no let’s just leave this alone and if my brother finds this well then that would be the point to tell him all of the background to our other house it was haunted all of our houses have been haunted and so let’s see if this will lead to us being haunted let’s hope that we aren’t.
After my brother got off of school he hopped in my car crying and I asked what happened he said he was being bullied so I walked in there and I knew who it was I walked into the school and I popped him right on his eye and I busted it open once that happened I bolted directly to my car after I ripped the license plate directly off and drove as fast as I possibly could. Once we went home I decided to put me and my brother in the satanic door and we opened the door and I shoved my little brother down first after that we hit the floor so hard my leg was dislocated in over 5 places so I took it upon myself and broke our legs so that we would not be as injured as before once that was done we saw a dark shadowy figure he grabbed us by our feet and dragged us on the jagged floor. Once we got to where he hung his victims me and my brother tried fighting but we couldn’t do anything he yanked the person who was hanging on my rope and put it around my throat and at last he pulled the switch that hung me before I could see it was satin and that was when the lights went out and that was the end of my journey.


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This is one of the best pieces I have written.


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