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Deadly Love

November 26, 2014
By Lanii123 BRONZE, Spring Valley, New York
Lanii123 BRONZE, Spring Valley, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Failure is simply the opportunity to begin again, this time more intelligently."-Henry Ford


Dear Mom,

 

   Sorry, I ran away from home. I'm also sorry the wedding we had was so chaotic. I honestly didn't know Brooke was so against us getting married. I thought she loved me just as much as I loved her. We've been together for so long. Four long years. Anyway I ran away for a good reason. I'm on my way to find Brooke. I want a second chance... Do you think she'll give me one?

 

Your Son,

   Nate

 

 

Dear Mom,

 

   I found Brooke. I called her mom and she told me exactly where she was. Her mom apologized so many times about what happened at the wedding. I told her it was oaky but, I don't think she believed me. I made my way to where Brooke was and I saw her standing outside looking as beautiful as ever. Her hair is blonde now. I stayed in my car... I actually didn't have the guts to go up to her. I'm a coward I know. I'm actually afraid of what she might say. I'll let you know what happens when I have the courage to talk to her.

 

Love,

 Nate

 

 

Dear Mom,

 

   It's been two weeks and I still haven't been able to talk to her. I've been visiting her secretly though. While I was at it, I found out some interesting news. She has a boyfriend. Guess who it is, Michael. Can you believe it? I think my heart just broke into about a million pieces. I called him and asked if he ever had an affair with Brooke while we were together. He said no. I don't know what to believe at this point. What do you think?

 

Yours Truly,

    Nate

 

 

Dear Mom,

 

   Last night I snuck into Brookes new place and decided to snoop around.They should really consider locking their windows. I know it wasn't the right thing to do but, I was just so curious. I walked around the house and saw so many pictures of Brooke and Michael. They looked so happy. It feels like what Brooke and I had never existed. I wonder how long their realtionship has been going on. Anyway, I found my way up to their room and decided to watch them while they slept. They looked so peaceful. Oh, I forgot to mention I saw a ring on Brookes finger. But it wasn't the one I gave her. I guess they're getting married. We have a pretty good idea on why she didn't want to marry me, huh? She found someone better.

 

Your Heartbroken Son,

            Nate

 

 

Dear Mom,

 

   I've been sneaking into Brookes new home a lot while they were sleeping. Does that make me a creep? I sure hope not. I jsut can't seem to stay away from her. I know I need to though. It would be the best thing for me to do. But today while I was doing my usual snooping, I found some more exciting news. They're having a child together. A child. I was still exploring their house when I found a nursery all set up. They must be having a little boy and apparently his name will be Jason. I think it's time I came home. I can't take anymore of this. I'll be there soon.

 

Yours Truly,

     Nate

 

 

Dear Mom,

 

   I did something terrible. I was on my way home. I swear. I had my bags packed and everything. I started driving at around 9 p.m but, I made a U-turn. I jsut had to see Brooke one last time, for closure. When I got there, I found them asleep. I expected them to be up. I snuck in like I ususally did and took one last look around the house. Just as I was about to sneak back out, something inside me snapped. I knew I was about to do something I would later regret but, I didn't stop myself. I was thinking of going to their room and stabbing them to death but, I knew I wouldn't get the deed done quick enough. So, I looked for a couple of matches and some gasoline and set the house on fire. I was going to kill them mom. And I had no intention of calling the cops or doing anything that could possibly save them. I've become a madman. I know you'd be ashamed of me and I would carry this burden with me forever if I lived. So I stayed in the house while it was beginning to burn down to the ground. I didn't try to run out and save myself. I know you're probably crying while reading my last note to you but, just know that I love you and I'm sorry. I'll see you on the other side?

 

Your Beloved Son,

       Nate


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