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February 25, 2009
By Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.



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on Apr. 15 2009 at 8:46 pm
hey_itskatelyn PLATINUM, Willis, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“God, of your goodness, give me yourself; you are enough for me, and anything less that I could ask for would not do you full honour. And if I ask anything that is less, I shall always lack something, but in you alone I have everything”

I love your poem. The simplicity is amazing, but it also makes me think deeper. Very cool.

Check out the poem, Heartbroken and also Caged by Katelyn H.!!! Its cool

on Apr. 15 2009 at 1:07 pm
This was by far the best thing I've read today, and I'm quite far in all the poems. Short and simple, but with a very obvious meaning. [:

DoLL_F@C3 said...
on Apr. 7 2009 at 8:28 pm
DoLL_F@C3, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"FORGIVING YESTERDAY, LIVING FOR TODAY, NOT WORRIED BOUT TOMORROW." Doll

i really like this one. Its short and gets right to the point

on Apr. 4 2009 at 2:40 pm
sminor09 PLATINUM, Garden, Michigan
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It would be nice if we could cruise between past and present, and the future like we cruise down a street in a car.

Hillary SILVER said...
on Apr. 4 2009 at 6:59 am
Hillary SILVER, Concord, California
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Great poem! Yeah time feels like that all the time. but at least it keeps everything from happening all at once. You've got talent.

Mena<3 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2009 at 1:20 pm
Mena<3 BRONZE, Darlington, Wisconsin
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wow..this is definatly one of my favorites!

=]

on Apr. 3 2009 at 1:49 am
!Kachell!;) BRONZE, Moline, Illinois
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Wait i dont get itt<3

LOL????

:)

on Apr. 1 2009 at 6:23 pm
ryangallagher BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Science without religion is lame, religion without science is blind." -- Albert Einstein

short, sweet, meaningful, perfect

on Apr. 1 2009 at 3:26 am
Rebecca Moretti Moretti BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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i wish that too

on Mar. 29 2009 at 1:46 am
CloudedCrystal SILVER, Florissant, Missouri
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I am feelin this poem. If time were a street, I would go back, change a few things...but I cant. However, when you write stuff like this, you can make time whatever you want.

Jess/poet said...
on Mar. 27 2009 at 9:26 pm
Jess/poet, Montreal, Other
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This is actually good, instead of the other stuff these people put on here, I might actually appreciate this.

StarKiller said...
on Mar. 24 2009 at 6:21 pm
I Thought It Was AMAZING!!!!! Time Seems Like That To Me ALL the Time!!

on Mar. 22 2009 at 1:30 pm
Phoenix22 PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Time is a great theme for a poem. I always wonder why everyone's life always revolves around time.

on Mar. 21 2009 at 6:47 pm
mysterygirl SILVER, Clare, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a mystery; Life is a Game, Play it Well

time is the key, that's for sure... good job!

on Mar. 19 2009 at 2:49 am
italianxbonafide BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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i really like it

on Mar. 15 2009 at 7:14 pm
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
13 articles 1 photo 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

YES! YES! the world needs more poems like these.

on Mar. 9 2009 at 3:40 pm
i thought it was pretty good props to beau

on Mar. 4 2009 at 12:33 pm
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I like the first line, but the rest doesn't make a lot of sense to me. It has a very cool feeling, though.

on Mar. 3 2009 at 8:05 pm
kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"when your hourglass runs out of sand you can't flip it over and start again."(changes weekly so check next weeks l8er)

it was sort and sweet luv it!

on Mar. 2 2009 at 3:29 pm
Sydney(: BRONZE, N/a, New Hampshire
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I......liked it.


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