Picture Street

By Beau W., Goreville, IL
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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.

This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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StarKiller said...
Mar. 24, 2009 at 6:21 pm:

I Thought It Was AMAZING!!!!! Time Seems Like That To Me ALL the Time!!

teenpoet said...
Mar. 22, 2009 at 1:30 pm:

Time is a great theme for a poem. I always wonder why everyone's life always revolves around time.

mysterygirl said...
Mar. 21, 2009 at 6:47 pm:

time is the key, that's for sure... good job!

italianxbonafide said...
Mar. 19, 2009 at 2:49 am:

i really like it

project827 said...
Mar. 15, 2009 at 7:14 pm:

YES! YES! the world needs more poems like these.

dannyglover23 said...
Mar. 9, 2009 at 3:40 pm:

i thought it was pretty good props to beau

Christina said...
Mar. 4, 2009 at 12:33 pm:

I like the first line, but the rest doesn't make a lot of sense to me. It has a very cool feeling, though.

kissingdawn331 said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 8:05 pm:

it was sort and sweet luv it!

i<3you said...
Mar. 2, 2009 at 3:29 pm:

I......liked it.

luvmakestheworldgoround8 said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 12:20 am:

Beautiful... Worthwhile. Please comment on my writing at- http://www.teenink.com/raw/Poetry/article/85424/Trapped/

Duckie430 said...
Feb. 27, 2009 at 2:11 pm:

very short. but i like it.

Shelby V. said...
Feb. 26, 2009 at 4:45 pm:

This woke me up in the morning.

E. H. said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 9:36 pm:

This poem is lovely and totally cheered me up.