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Daddy's Womb MAG
April 23, 2008
i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.
So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.
i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.
The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.
i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.
i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.
© Anonymous
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KristieM said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 9:40 am
I really liked this piece of writing. I thought it was very clever and had good wording.
amhotopp said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 9:36 am
you are a very good writer!
freeo said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:55 am
The poem was good
wesley d said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:45 am
nice job....
Ayushi_austen BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 4:44 am
my thoughts exactly!!write something commendable(like dis 1 )and then we shall see....
teenpoet8 said...
on Feb. 24 2011 at 7:51 pm
Bubblybubbles223 hey listen, i know youre entitled to your opinion and all, but this is a site for constructive criticism, not cruelty. . i feel bad for the author of this poem because they do not deserve to put up with what you think is just a harmless opinion.
the.beast said...
on Feb. 24 2011 at 4:38 pm
i never had a dad........i want one like this one!
Bakerstudent13 said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 2:41 pm
That was really good! I wish i had a dad who was cool like yours....?
Annie said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 8:07 am
The comments here are supposed to be on this poem, not to advertise your own work. Also, when I did a search for your screename, you don't even have any work on this website, unless it's anonymous; anyway, my point being-this is not the place to advertise your work.
ski_mayday BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:10 pm
I guess I would like to know what the other was thinking when they wrote it because I can't figure it out.
evergreen232 said...
on Feb. 19 2011 at 7:46 pm
Wow. this is a gr8 poem!! keep it up!!! :)
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