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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Dec. 31 2010 at 9:53 am
xTheKillerDollx SILVER, Wood Dale, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Tiffany: Well i'm not getting pregnant again. My mother always said once is a blessing, twice is a curse.
Chucky: Well that would explain your sister...
-Seed of Chucky-

reminds me of a boy in my class who i had a huge crush on and he turned out to be a jerk.

on Dec. 30 2010 at 9:26 am
youaretheinkandlifeisthepaper BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I want to unfold. I do not want to be folded anywhere, because there, where I am folded, I am a lie." Maggie Stiefvater

Love it. I wrote a poem like it once but it was corny. Yours isn"t! :)

JMThe-one GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2010 at 5:05 pm
JMThe-one GOLD, Enfield, Connecticut
11 articles 10 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things that give value to survival.
C. S. Lewis

Ouch. lol. I guess all men are jerks huh? lol. 

on Dec. 19 2010 at 10:24 pm
Shania_Harmon SILVER, Sulphur Springs, Texas
9 articles 6 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Listen to the mustn'ts, child. Listen to the don'ts. Listen to the shouldn'ts, the impossibles, the won'ts. Listen to the never haves, then listen close to me... Anything can happen, child. Anything can be.” - Shel Silverstein

:D i love this poem...

on Dec. 17 2010 at 8:38 pm
JaimeNichole SILVER, Trenton, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a lie. Reality is an illusion. And sanity is insanity in disguise.

I love this. So true. Very easy for most girls to relate to. It had good flow, and your emotions came out really well. Excellent :] keep writing. Please check out some of my work, i'd really appreciate it

delaney95 GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2010 at 10:58 pm
delaney95 GOLD, St. Charles, Missouri
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favorite line= precious jerk

genius


on Dec. 16 2010 at 1:41 pm
heather_marie PLATINUM, Deshler, Ohio
21 articles 2 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you was beyond my control

i really enjoyed reading ur poem

jessica411 said...
on Dec. 15 2010 at 8:13 am
very good reminds me of a boy at my highschool who i care alot about

on Dec. 14 2010 at 8:16 am
llamachick PLATINUM, Seneca, South Carolina
42 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe

i loved this so much i used it for my school project, has so much meaning. <3

bestseller12 said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 10:04 pm
Well written. Very original. Great.

on Dec. 12 2010 at 4:09 pm
vannanodrama GOLD, Mattituck, New York
15 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
whatever you do in life will be insignificant. But it's very important that you do it.

Really good :)

on Dec. 12 2010 at 2:24 pm
sillygirl880 BRONZE, Spring Grove, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"IF I CANT DO IT ILL DO IT"

wowmthat was great its like u look at them and you tell yourself that they are jerks but you cant help your self sometimes

Kaylynluvsu said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 7:29 pm
Kaylynluvsu, Milford, Connecticut
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wow i love this. it totoly describes how we love all these things about guys and then they r jerks... but we still cant help loving them... its sometimes frustrating and you can totoly see the feelings throught the poem

oriana BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 4:11 pm
oriana BRONZE, Dartmouth, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I LOVE PIE!!!!

that was a really cool poem and i hope you post more.

on Dec. 9 2010 at 6:50 pm
smilesunshine PLATINUM, Puyallup, Washington
34 articles 4 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're lucky enough to be different from everyone else, don't change to be the same." ~Taylor Swift

This is really good. It reminds me of how a lot of high school aged guys are. They're jerks, and some girls just can't help but to fall for them for whatever reason.

on Dec. 9 2010 at 6:29 pm
erinalexandra BRONZE, Matthews, North Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up doesn't always mean you're weak. Sometimes it means you're strong enough to let go."

I love it! I can relate so much

emidances96 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 6:05 pm
this reminds me of my boyfriend exactly. only we just broke up. i think i'll email it to him and see how he feels about that! such a jerk

on Dec. 9 2010 at 5:34 pm
brodiephillips, Warsaw, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
if you got one life live it happy!!!!

this is cute

katybug said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 2:41 pm
this poem reminds me of my boyfriend and i..

Cmg6604 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 2:17 pm
Cmg6604 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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This poem can be true with some guys. I know some girls that talk like this about some guys, but it usually turns out alright. When I started to read this poem, I thought the poem was going to be about how nice the boy is. After I read this poem, I knew the writer was not talking good about the boy. The writer was talking bad about the boy. My favorite line in this poem is, "you precious jerk." This line made me realize that the poem had changed from a happy mood to a angry mood.