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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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the_real_reggie_rocket said...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 8:50 am:
I know exactly how you feel. Its like, you love him, but you're almost mad at yourself for loving him because he's a jerk. THis has happened to me many times before. Keep on writing girl :)
 
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guardian_angel said...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 3:18 pm:
I love this poem! I relate to it so much. You never realize what love you had until its gone. 
 
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magiclover13 said...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 10:18 am:
This is so sweet. People don't know about love until it's said and done.
 
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CChloe said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 8:25 pm:
Oh my gosh! I was reading this, and I totally get it! My boyfriend is JUST like that! I love him, yet everything about him screams "JERK!" Its actually quite horrible :/ Love the poem though! :D
 
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Wonderland said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 7:22 pm:
I loved this poem its very good and it reminds me of myself!!
 
smileyface9 replied...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 7:24 pm :
me too! I love it :D
 
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Poet_in_Motion This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 6:55 pm:
I love this poem so so so much. It's supremely well-written, and I relate to the subject completely! You are very talented; don't ever stop writing. :) <3
 
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Madi L. said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 5:41 pm:
this reminds me of my bgf
 
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GothChik95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 4:19 pm:
this reminds me of my own personal experiences...you go grl!
 
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MirandaLee said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 10:05 am:
This is really good. (: ♥
 
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Lacieee said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 9:42 am:
This was superr good :) i really liked it and i totally know how you feel. gooodd job
 
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Taty15 said...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 1:16 pm:
this is really good...keep writting
 
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WannaBeWriternumbertwo said...
Oct. 24, 2010 at 6:32 pm:
This descibed me and my boyfriend to a T! I think everyone can relate at one point of their lives. this is a wonderfull poem!
 
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BellelaVie said...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 11:03 pm:
I can really relate to this right no in my life. It was an amazing ballad and I'm sure I will read it over and over again. it is cute and sweet, but sends a message of torment in the heart. it really makes you think.
 
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Lymairie said...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 11:25 am:
LOVE IT!! <3
 
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honanmana said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 9:47 pm:
This is adorable!
 
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sidneynicole said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 5:15 pm:
i lovedd this ! i could relate to this poem
 
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xoxoemoxoxo said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 8:16 am:
this is a really good poem i enjoyed it(:
 
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nygal252 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 5:10 pm:
i have to agree with s m wells "jerk"deffetnly pulls you in
 
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S M Wells said...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 3:02 pm:
I thought it was nothing extaordinairy at fist. But Every time I see the tittle, I have to go back and read it again.
 
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