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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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tigersroxs2 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 1:48 pm
I think you don't

on Dec. 9 2010 at 9:58 am
bookworm77 BRONZE, Emporia, Kansas
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is short, break the rules, forgive quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably, and never regret anything that made you smile." Mark Twain

i love this! it isn't the typical love poem and the twist was great! keep writing :D

on Dec. 9 2010 at 9:46 am
alexandrax003 BRONZE, Morrisville, New York
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When it can't get any worse, write a song about it."

i love this (:

cutp9396 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 7:19 am
Awwwwwe , This Poem Is Soooo Adorable ") <333333

on Dec. 8 2010 at 2:39 pm
NeverSayShhh SILVER, Two Rivers, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"i dont think your beautiful, i think your beyond it\" [lil wayne]

=] ha!(: exactly

on Dec. 8 2010 at 10:36 am
LexieMonster SILVER, Spring, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is a learning experience. Push yourself and you will grow." -Rami

This is incredibly amazing. I love it

on Dec. 8 2010 at 12:33 am
the_recreational_spirit GOLD, Halifax, Other
18 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
look at life with every angle
because the angle that you miss could be the one that changes your life

i like this one too good job

on Dec. 5 2010 at 4:58 pm
Gracious PLATINUM, Go Away, Kansas
22 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life sucks and then you die, yeah, i should be so lucky"



-Jacob, Twilight

I’m still that girl who falls when she runs, Getting back up, because falling is fun.

This sounds like my love life, good writing

on Dec. 1 2010 at 6:54 pm
AlexisRivera015, Warren, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you’re alive, it isn’t.

wow this is so trueeee

love it

:)

read mine


on Nov. 30 2010 at 10:33 pm
Bnubbs PLATINUM, Goshen, Kentucky
21 articles 6 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let it be! All you need is love!

true that sister!! 

on Nov. 30 2010 at 7:10 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

Wow. this is so concise and clear and exaclty what so many people feel. Its like that one really hot, special, funny, guy - who is such a jerk - but you can't stop kinda caring about him somewhere inside. Very very very well done.

on Nov. 29 2010 at 8:52 pm
Tanglebird BRONZE, Asheville, North Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think. Therefore I am.

i totally agreee, everything in this poem is so true and put to a great meter.

on Nov. 29 2010 at 6:27 pm
rachelchace DIAMOND, Stratford, Connecticut
65 articles 9 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everyone were perfect, Individuality would be extinct." -Rachel Chace (me)

you have amazing eloquent language (: i love how it flows so well, and jerks... i hate them.

on Nov. 28 2010 at 4:04 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

This is INCREDIBLE! I love it!

on Nov. 26 2010 at 9:43 pm
NightOwl SILVER, Anacortes, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 12 comments
That is so clever! And also so true! very creative. great writing!

on Nov. 26 2010 at 5:25 pm
LeonorEmmalyn, Arroyo Hondo, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I hold with those who favor fire."
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, and I-- I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

*REALLY* good!! plz check out some of my poems when they get approved:))

Trulie GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 3:06 pm
Trulie GOLD, Beltsville, Maryland
10 articles 10 photos 51 comments
LOVED IT! keep writing.

on Nov. 25 2010 at 4:03 pm
Breeyup12 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Kill two birds with one stone..."

Good!! :) really true! <3

Meli14 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2010 at 1:51 am
Meli14 BRONZE, Othello, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"god is love, and love is real"

I Am Free Read please!Rate thanks(:

on Nov. 23 2010 at 6:46 pm
kebruiser BRONZE, Festus, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
Great poetry and I love the message sent out with this and the description, it's fantastic!