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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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searbear180 said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 8:49 pm
Wow.  This is a fantastic poem!! Great work! keep it up!!!

on Feb. 17 2011 at 9:22 am
kelsey2097 SILVER, Boothwyn, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
im not a fighter im a lover, but ill fight for what i love

they dont no what they got and love till they lose it

on Feb. 16 2011 at 7:55 pm
Sarah-class2011 BRONZE, Houston, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I Corinthians 13 4-8
"Love is patient, love is kind..... Love never ends."

Wow. Awesome. This is so spot onto a situation I was in a few months back. Good work.

 

Believe me, you'll be better off with out him. Trust me.


on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:28 pm
Jazzalyn BRONZE, Hortense, Georgia
4 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The power of a glance has been so much abused in love stories, that it has come to be disbelieved in. Few people dare now to say that two beings have fallen in love because they have looked at each other. Yet it is in this way that love begins, and in this way only.”

I LOVE IT!! Your amazing poem just inspired me to write one! And its so true I can relate so much! Love the Poem!! ^.^

on Feb. 16 2011 at 7:31 am
The_Delusional_Philosopher BRONZE, Burbank, California
2 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am a God, for I can create anything from the manifestation of my thoughts"
"Because it's there"

Mmmmmmmmm ;)

Batmaan BRONZE said...
on Feb. 14 2011 at 10:22 am
Batmaan BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win." -Stephen King

oh wow im sorry that happend to you...you will get through it though and youll find someone better...trust me(:

on Feb. 13 2011 at 4:59 pm
ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
39 articles 2 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take life to seriously, nobody makes it out alive anyways"-Unknown

I love it! Heck yes this is true...you know what you're talking about... (:

MKimmi said...
on Feb. 13 2011 at 1:15 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
0 articles 0 photos 103 comments
I LOVE IT!!!! SO TRUE AND IT FLOWS!!!♥

on Feb. 13 2011 at 12:32 pm
yasmina.tabbal GOLD, Beirut, Other
10 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can get arrested for wearing those colors - Zach, A Chorus Line

It's Valentines Day and here I am crying about the jerk who broke my heart.

on Feb. 13 2011 at 12:31 pm
yasmina.tabbal GOLD, Beirut, Other
10 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can get arrested for wearing those colors - Zach, A Chorus Line

Isn't that always the case? :S Boys suck.

on Feb. 13 2011 at 8:40 am
Mahimaangelin SILVER, Ernakulam, Kerala, Other
8 articles 3 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best and most beautiful things in this world cannot be seen or even heard, but must be felt within the hearts.-Helen Keller

wow, I really love this poem!

Good work! Keep it up buddy!


on Feb. 11 2011 at 4:27 pm
angehuertas27 SILVER, Lake Mary, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments
wow. great poem. its funny because that actually is applying to my life right now! But anyways really good job i love it!

on Feb. 10 2011 at 2:50 pm
danibean11 BRONZE, North Las Vegas, Nevada
4 articles 5 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"OOPS, wrong password!"

This is great. The best guys are jerks. : )

on Feb. 10 2011 at 8:13 am
CassidyMarturana BRONZE, Califon, New Jersey
1 article 4 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about just waiting out the storm. It's about learning to dance in the rain."

Great poem! :)

youwish said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 8:42 pm
i love this but in my world hes only a jerk because i love him.

on Feb. 9 2011 at 11:14 am
cristibabygirl BRONZE, Blythewood, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"what you wanna be married to me for anyways?"
"so i can kiss you anytime i want"
<3

this is amazin , i can relate to this because of my ex and how i still love him and how he is so good to me but someone lied to him about me and for that , he is a jerk . a jerk i love

on Feb. 8 2011 at 1:31 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

This is really good!

It reminds me of a Roleplay I do with my friend, I have a character, Lavi, who's of course a total jerk, and my friend's character, ayam, falls in love with him despite it.

This so sounds like something a lot of girls can relate to, and I absolutely love it, it's spectacular.


on Feb. 7 2011 at 5:16 pm
ski_mayday BRONZE, Uhrichsville, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
*"A true friend reaches for your hand, and touches your heart."
*"Forever is composed of nows." -Emily Dickinson
*"If music be the food of love, then play on." -William Shakespeare

This is a wonderful poem. Many people can relate to this, and that's part of what makes it so great. Keep writing :).

on Feb. 6 2011 at 4:41 pm
roadrunner BRONZE, Freeport, Maine
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Bad beginning.

love this poem. <3

on Feb. 6 2011 at 12:58 pm
clairbair14 GOLD, Maplewood, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"love is blind but friendship closes its eyes"

ugh i also am attracted to jerks too! and judging by allt he comments lots of girls are!