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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Feb. 4 2011 at 8:38 pm
Maracuja BRONZE, Vancouver, Other
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most wasted day, is that in which you have no laughed."

Too true for words ... except these :)

miracle said...
on Feb. 3 2011 at 12:25 pm
i realy like dis poem a lot is so good is wonderful

on Feb. 1 2011 at 8:55 pm
TayIndago BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of expensive chocolates, you"ll never know what you"ll get next until you go for it.

wow this poem was absolutly amazing...I can COMPLELTY relate to this, and it just reminded me of the jerk that I used to be with. Nice poem! keep up the good work!

on Jan. 30 2011 at 1:23 am
missamanda GOLD, Ft. Collins, Colorado
11 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love. Fall in love and stay in love. Write only what you love, and love what you write. The key word is love. You have to get up in the morning and write something you love, something to live for." -Ray Bradbury

This was amazing. I can really feel what you are going for. Who doesn't love a good jerk?

on Jan. 29 2011 at 10:29 pm
frenchfry BRONZE, Dibble, Oklahoma
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Live as there is no tomorrow, Love as if you never had before, and Laugh as though you never could stop:)

I can realate to this so well

kayla615 said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 4:23 pm
soo real! i can relate to this in many ways

on Jan. 28 2011 at 5:16 pm
krazykelsey BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a work in progress for the rest of you life

wow iv been there too many times with the same guy

 


on Jan. 27 2011 at 12:50 pm
KobyObi4 BRONZE, Lemont, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We live by faith not by sight." ---2 Corinthians 5:7

woww i can totally relate to this....lovely :)

on Jan. 27 2011 at 8:16 am
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
48 articles 1 photo 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us."- Lestat

Completly love it ^^

on Jan. 26 2011 at 2:22 pm
Emma.ryan SILVER, Andover, Massachusetts
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments
Completely true!

on Jan. 26 2011 at 6:23 am
marissa87 BRONZE, Glenmoore, Pennsylvania
4 articles 3 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
what is popular is not always right and what is right is not always popular

i love this poem it is soooo true and amazing!!

on Jan. 25 2011 at 8:19 am
jacqui95 BRONZE, Brandon, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
All life is an experiment. The more experiments you make the better.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

this reminds me of someone that i know and its all true!~!!!

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on Jan. 24 2011 at 5:29 pm
Athena95 GOLD, Auburn, New York
11 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
If we stopped wondering we might just relax

I love this poem its amazing

 


Shanjello said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 9:16 am
Amazing poem flows nicely!!!!! Very true about lots of guys lolzzzz. :) XD

on Jan. 22 2011 at 9:05 pm
kelsey2097 SILVER, Boothwyn, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
im not a fighter im a lover, but ill fight for what i love

Oh my gosh! you are really sweet and good

Nalda BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2011 at 8:02 pm
Nalda BRONZE, Reynoldsburg, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My heart has heard You say, 'Come and talk with me.'
And my heart responds, 'Lord, I am coming'"
(Psalm 27:8).

Your poem is concise, yet beautiful in its simplicity. I like how you describe what girls, often, secretly think about those we are attracted to-- those physically gorgeous guys whose character, unfortunately, do not match their dreamy appearances.

on Jan. 22 2011 at 5:04 pm
lovetowrite22 SILVER, ..., Colorado
5 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything happens for a reason."

great poem! i liked that it was simple but still very effective. good job!:)

on Jan. 22 2011 at 1:50 pm
novelistspast. BRONZE, Brook Park, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I try to leave out the parts that people skip. ~Elmore Leonard

This is really good; and so true. I like your word choices. :)) keep writing.

AliMac BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2011 at 11:42 am
AliMac BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not how many breathes you take, but how many moments that take your breath away

I really liked this poem. I agree with what Jones said. I started this and was like, "Is this gonna be about the perfect guy?" I love how its not

on Jan. 22 2011 at 9:48 am
ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
39 articles 2 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take life to seriously, nobody makes it out alive anyways"-Unknown

Love it! keep writing!