The Third Person

April 20, 2014
By KjStormy, Melbourne, Other
KjStormy, Melbourne, Other
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Summary:

Honour has DID (Dissociative Identity Disorder) as a result of witnessing her friends murder. She developed two new personalities however one became over protective and aggressive so Honour wished her away, and strangely the third personality disappeared.

Nine years later she is still haunted by what she saw so many year ago. Her family and best friend try and help her move on but the only thing that distracts her is assisting the mute, autistic boy named Alec in communicating, and making friends.

However a warning from her still remaining second personality suggests this boy may be dangerous and she discovers that his past and reason for not being able to talk may have something to do with her friends murder.


Kiah B.

The Third Person


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on May. 17 2016 at 2:45 pm
this is actually very good, tbh i expected that it would be some bad story about some weird thing or whatever. its well written and had a lot of very descriptive words, which painted an image in my mind

imagonner said...
on May. 11 2016 at 5:41 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
' its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.' don't forget who you are to me.

yes I definitely agree with you. she uses words to make it more realistic, and alive!

imagonner said...
on May. 11 2016 at 5:40 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
' its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.' don't forget who you are to me.

I really love your choice of vocabulary!! pls check out my first story and comment on it, nobody has read it yet :{ !! I also love how brave you are to write that type of story!

JeepHer said...
on Feb. 23 2016 at 12:11 pm
JeepHer, Easley, South Carolina
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I LOVE THIS STORY! I am only in chapter 5 , but I'm hooked, keep up the AMAZING work! :)

on Nov. 4 2015 at 10:11 am
GabbyHernandez2 BRONZE, Addis, Louisiana
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“Honour has DID (Dissociative Identity Disorder) as a result of witnessing her friends murder. She developed two new personalities however one became over protective and aggressive so Honour wished her away, and strangely the third personality disappeared.” I enjoyed reading this and liked the way you used a lot of descriptive words to make the story more fascinating.

Jassie said...
on Oct. 6 2014 at 3:22 am
Very impressed. Just finished chapter four and looking foward to reading the rest and seeing where this story is going. Good use of descriptive terminology.

on Aug. 17 2014 at 9:48 pm
real_saxman BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
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No major problems I can see. You have great description, dialogue and plot. The only thing I would reccomend is adding commas to the end of your dialogue. It's a very minor fix.

maddeeilea said...
on Jul. 22 2014 at 6:31 am
Finally commenting!! aha. I seriously love this! Psychology and mental disorders have always been something i found facinating and i love the way you portray it in this!  the fourth chapter was a bit confusing at first, but i soon got the hang of it and figured it out :D  let me know when the next chapter is up!! xx




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