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Wendrenhood

February 16, 2012
By KateLynnLeigh BRONZE, Farmersburg, Indiana
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE, Farmersburg, Indiana
3 articles 4 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only way to get to the top is to get off your bottom."


Summary:

Ami, a nineteen year old girl, who isolates herself because she knows that she is unlike any of the other children is faced with many choices about her powers. These gifts, powerful elemental power, are starting to show themselves along with many strange people all after one thing. Her! She is struggling to find who she can trust and who she is all the while searching for the answers about what she is.


Katie K.

Wendrenhood


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on Apr. 16 2012 at 3:17 pm
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE, Farmersburg, Indiana
3 articles 4 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only way to get to the top is to get off your bottom."

ya, makes sense. thanks :) it's very helpful.

on Apr. 16 2012 at 3:15 pm
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE, Farmersburg, Indiana
3 articles 4 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only way to get to the top is to get off your bottom."

thanks, ya i meant by

on Apr. 16 2012 at 3:08 pm
mariahisabellevin PLATINUM, Santa Ana, California
32 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Now you see me, now you don't
Don't ask me where I'm at
'Cause I'm a million miles away"- Green Day

ps you have a typo, i think you meant "by" not "y" here: His beautiful daughter, taken y this stranger, 

on Apr. 16 2012 at 3:06 pm
mariahisabellevin PLATINUM, Santa Ana, California
32 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Now you see me, now you don't
Don't ask me where I'm at
'Cause I'm a million miles away"- Green Day

The stranger ignored the blind woman and started to walk to the kitchen were several children had gathered to gawk. His hand lay on the glittering hilt while he eyed each child carefully. He was here to find the girl. "Where is the girl who is not to be yours?"

 

i think personally, you could make it a lot better if you were to make this stranger more intriquing, does that make sense? i think if you were to suggest that he eminated a sense of mystery and make him seem very dark and powerful, it would definately draw the reader in. for me, i love reading books that really capture my curiosity and my intrigue. it is always nice to have a brooding, dark character and it almost always captures a reader


on Mar. 29 2012 at 7:51 am
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE, Farmersburg, Indiana
3 articles 4 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only way to get to the top is to get off your bottom."

Thanks :) I'm really trying to add on to it with my blog... it doesn't take nearly as long as it does on here, but teen ink is really nice to use.

on Mar. 28 2012 at 6:51 pm
camboking19 SILVER, Springfield, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment

nice really pops

 


98jazzy98 said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:49 pm
98jazzy98, Lewiston, Minnesota
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
In order to learn to fly, all one must do is throw ones self at the ground, and forget to fall.

I really enjoyed reading this! I can't wait for more! 

on Mar. 7 2012 at 2:39 pm
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE, Farmersburg, Indiana
3 articles 4 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only way to get to the top is to get off your bottom."

Thank you. :)

pitt98 GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2012 at 9:28 pm
pitt98 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
10 articles 3 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not the days in life we remember, rather the moments." 
- Walt Disney

The part i read sounds really good. To make things longer, make each paragraph an "exploded moment" including as much detail as possible. For example "what did the slats of wood" look or feel like?

on Mar. 5 2012 at 2:50 pm
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE, Farmersburg, Indiana
3 articles 4 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only way to get to the top is to get off your bottom."

Thank you, it means a lot. I really do love to write... I really just came up with this concept a few weeks ago... any feedback would be great.

on Mar. 4 2012 at 6:12 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.

I just began to read it, and already I am in awe of your descriptive talent. I've been working on a book myself, and I know how long it takes to craft tales such as this. I'll keep reading!