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Matchmaker's Mansion

May 28, 2011
By Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."


Summary:

When Asha takes her first step inside the Matchmaker’s Mansion she had intended to find someone to take the place of her ex-boyfriend that had broken her heart…
But instead she was thrown into the arms of the mysterious Shay who makes her promise never to love him.
It all started with the first question of the Matchmaker’s Quiz: “Would you be willing to die for the person you loved?”
What will her answer be?


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on Apr. 5 2012 at 4:53 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Thanks so much! Different was what I was aiming for. Too many novels these days are the same- they follow a trend.

But my "different" novel also has the classic background of "Beauty and the Beast" which takes away the originality of the novel. :-) But that's ok.


on Apr. 5 2012 at 12:16 pm
K.Kills.Slowly. BRONZE, Dulce, New Mexico
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whether its a heartattack or heart break.. just like on Broadway, the show must go on.

This is awesome....... yet its different also.... its just plain AMAZING!!!!!

on Apr. 5 2012 at 12:16 pm
K.Kills.Slowly. BRONZE, Dulce, New Mexico
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whether its a heartattack or heart break.. just like on Broadway, the show must go on.

This is awesome....... yet its different also.... its just plain AMAZING!!!!!

IMme2 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 11:43 am
IMme2 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
just be yourself not some one your not.
- unknown

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz prrrreeeeeetttttttyyyyyy plz write more

 


on Apr. 4 2012 at 12:16 am
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 222 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

Yay!! I'll be watching for more!!

on Apr. 3 2012 at 10:10 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Muffin crumbs!! I didn't realize how many comments there were. Congrats on getting the 100th one!

Thanks so much. It's great to hear from you. :-) I rarely get a comment about Asha either; it's usually about the boys. So glad you like her! <3


on Apr. 3 2012 at 9:40 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

thought i'd add the 100th comment!

also, i can't wait to read more...

asha is so cute, i <3 her!


on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:02 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Thank you so much! I love hearing that people have been sticking through my long bouts of no writing.

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I can assure you that they'll be more soon. :-)


on Apr. 2 2012 at 8:33 am
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 222 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

LOVE IT! I've been reading since November or December or something, so can't wait for more! Beautiful job!

on Mar. 25 2012 at 8:15 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

I feel so honored! (And WELCOME to Teenink!! I hope you have lots of fun here and grow a lot in your writing.)

Thank you so much for your encouragement. I promise to keep writing more. :-)

See ya around!


on Mar. 25 2012 at 8:10 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

I'm so thankful for readers like you. :-D

You're awesome and thank you so much for your compliments. Sometimes I feel like I absolutely stink at writing, but all of my reader's comments help me to keep going. :-)

Sometimes I take too much time, and wish that time wasn't so valuable.

Please keep reading!


smiley66 said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 2:04 pm
smiley66, Bellevue, Washington
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.”
― Mae West

I'm a new member to teenink and your book was the first book i read. SO.... please write more :) you're such an amazing author!

on Mar. 20 2012 at 8:20 pm
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
16 articles 2 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

A-ha! my timing is impecable! I log back onto my account just as you post another outstanding chappie! I must confess author of Match MakersMAnison I was afraid you forgot about lil'ol Teenink and that little voice that says "Updat,Update!" But Behold! I am proven wrong.

the story has progressed so much , andboth it and the writing style i believe have grown. 

Keeping us always on cliff hanger aren't you? (well, i'd like to do that too..)   Im quite interested in the events of the story, espiceally now that Shay is . . . showing face? and a mysterious ex.(abusive?)

 So,Please Update but remeber, don't rush your story because you feel rushed, make it good even if you have to take your time.

~CrAZyWRiTeR~


on Mar. 19 2012 at 10:00 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

your book is awesome!!! i love it!!! keep writing... i want to read more!!! i <3 asha, she's so cute! :)

on Mar. 13 2012 at 5:34 pm
cut-out-ur-eyes SILVER, Mechicsvil, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
See the animal in his cage that you built. Are you sure what side you're on? What if everything around you, Isn't quite as it seems? What if all the world you think you know, Is an elaborate dream? -Nine Inch Nails

awww chapter 21 is cute =3

on Mar. 7 2012 at 7:20 am
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo

Oh my gosh! I love this story! Please write more!!!!!! I can't wait to know what comes next. 

BloodRedSnow said...
on Mar. 6 2012 at 10:05 pm
BloodRedSnow, Indianapolis, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Even if you are on the right track, you will get run over if you just sit there." - Will Rogers

I really like this story so far. please do keep writing!

on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:26 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Very good logic. I like you already. :-D (In a good way.)

Keep reading to see who really gets her.


on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:25 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Awww-you're too cute. It warms my heart to know that you love my story. :-D Keep reading!

on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:24 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Yes ma'am. I've written more- ENJOY!