stone crest

March 18, 2012
By nerdlover17 PLATINUM, kendallivlle, Indiana
nerdlover17 PLATINUM, Kendallivlle, Indiana
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Summary:

Kyla enters stone crest and stirs things up. an evil is coming, but can the team she made last or even function. creatures are mixed together. some lines are crossed. the town will be changed forever


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on Apr. 14 2013 at 9:37 am
nerdlover17 PLATINUM, Kendallivlle, Indiana
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thanks. i have actually edied this quite a bit since i posted this. at least you commented.

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on Apr. 13 2013 at 7:59 pm
None0 BRONZE, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Believe in the ideal, not the idol." - Serra

I did a quick skim-read of your book, so this may not apply to everything. Your characters are very well-developed, and the plot seems intriguing, but I think your weakness is in the setting. When I read, I can't really picture any sort of place in my head where this story might take place. I know description of the setting takes away from some of the plot, but so far, the novel seems more focused on just an exchange of dialogue (which feels somewhat rushed, but that could just be me skim reading). Anyways, work on your exposition and transitory scenes. Sorry if I was too critical. I'm still new at this.


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