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My First Kiss

September 8, 2009
By Anonymous

We sat there on his balcony looking at the stars on a summer night. The night sky is pitch black, well is suppose to be, the stars make the sky brighter. All of a sudden his arm went around my waist and that shocked me. It was unexpected. I didn't know what to say. I turned around to find his shining blue eyes staring down at me. I was speechless. The love that was in his eyes, it made skin tingle in a good way. I was afraid what will happen next so I turned away and looked at the sky. "Hey is that the big dipper over there?" I asked. I really didn't see the big dipper I just wanted to say something to break that seemed like an everlasting silence. " No thats the not the big dipper." He said queitly and content. Then he moved the arm the was around my shoulders to my waste as he moved a little bit closer.I felt his eyes staring at me trying to read my expression, my mind. A shiver sped down my spine as he started caressing my back. I turned to stare back at him not expecting anything. Until he kissed me and his lips stayed on mine for what seemed like a forever. It was so tender. caring and soft. Just like what I hoped my first kiss to be like. When it was over I knew everything had just changed between us and that made me a bit scared.

The author's comments:
This is how i wanted my first kiss to be like.

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on Mar. 20 2010 at 3:24 am
xoxoLissieM SILVER, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Stop acting dumb cause your usually the smart one and I'm the dumb one!"

i wish my 1st kiss would be lyk dat!! luv it alot!!

on Mar. 12 2010 at 8:02 am
paranomial PLATINUM, Hyderabad, Other
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wonderful wrk..realy cute :)

on Mar. 8 2010 at 4:29 pm
JustWriting BRONZE, Sao Paulo, Other
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Fantastic! I wish my first kiss had been like that. It sucked.

sk8erboi said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:16 am
mine was just at the movies not romantic at all cause there was lik 6 friends just starring at me wen it happened

on Feb. 17 2010 at 8:02 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

im sorry i got confused,

on Feb. 14 2010 at 5:30 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Omg rlly? ppl wer i live, 13 is sooo young

emily kay said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 12:51 pm
mine was with my best friend. we keep it quiet cause we never dated but it was at night and as sweet, it didnt change much but it still happened. im glad it did (:

on Jan. 24 2010 at 12:59 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

yea i had mine at that time too

on Jan. 24 2010 at 10:29 am
Weightless2015 GOLD, Roselle, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream with my eyes open, sleep when I'm dead, love who my heart's chosen, and conquer what lies ahead." -Ryan Follese (lead singer of Hot Chelle Rae)

I've had kisses (parents and relatives) and my first kiss (boy when I was in kindergarten), but not my firs Kiss (when it actually means something)

summerlover said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 10:23 pm
I find it very interesting that you write with short syntax. You may want to work on your revising/editing, or re-reading capabilities however. Overall though, the piece was cute. Next time just a little more work will go a long ways. Thanks for sharing your work!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 9:27 pm
kimmycakes GOLD, Monrovia, California
14 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never let love bring u down" also "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb"

im 14 and iv had my first kiss i really liked ur poem my first kiss was in a car not romantic at all :(( </3

kathlyn16 said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 2:45 pm
kathlyn16, Irving, Texas
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well i havnt had my first kiss yet i hope it would be like that and i like how u express yr self

on Jan. 23 2010 at 9:59 am
Weightless2015 GOLD, Roselle, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream with my eyes open, sleep when I'm dead, love who my heart's chosen, and conquer what lies ahead." -Ryan Follese (lead singer of Hot Chelle Rae)

i kno exactly what u mean... like i can share it with the world cuz the world dont know me but i can't show it to my parents or anyone i know(cept u) cuz id die of embarrassment... and thats what my mom has a problem with

on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:47 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

I know lol. i have to type fast because I dont want my family to see what I write. I hate it when I find spelling mistakes

on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:51 pm
Weightless2015 GOLD, Roselle, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream with my eyes open, sleep when I'm dead, love who my heart's chosen, and conquer what lies ahead." -Ryan Follese (lead singer of Hot Chelle Rae)

You never told me u were kissed! but anyway good work just work on your grammar

KerAnn BRONZE said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 11:07 pm
KerAnn BRONZE, Stanton, Michigan
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I sure do wish my first kiss would have been like that. Good job.

on Jan. 1 2010 at 10:19 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

i read it and it was great!!!!!!

on Jan. 1 2010 at 10:18 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

mine was in a classroom and it was super quick

on Jan. 1 2010 at 10:50 am
onehandoneheart, San Marino, California
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Favorite Quote:
"In Paris they simply stared when I spoke to them in French; I never did succeed in making those idiots understand their language." - Mark Twain

Okay, nice work and everything, but please learn how to spell correctly. Seriously. "Waste"???????????

on Jan. 1 2010 at 12:09 am
Thethingiseek BRONZE, N Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"May we continue not to judge man by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character."- by
"The day we stopped fighting for eachother is the day we lost our humanity"-2012 movie
"No man is equivalent to the person next to him."me

I'm thirteen and I can't wait till something like this happens to me...but not too soon