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My First Kiss

September 8, 2009
By Anonymous

We sat there on his balcony looking at the stars on a summer night. The night sky is pitch black, well is suppose to be, the stars make the sky brighter. All of a sudden his arm went around my waist and that shocked me. It was unexpected. I didn't know what to say. I turned around to find his shining blue eyes staring down at me. I was speechless. The love that was in his eyes, it made skin tingle in a good way. I was afraid what will happen next so I turned away and looked at the sky. "Hey is that the big dipper over there?" I asked. I really didn't see the big dipper I just wanted to say something to break that seemed like an everlasting silence. " No thats the not the big dipper." He said queitly and content. Then he moved the arm the was around my shoulders to my waste as he moved a little bit closer.I felt his eyes staring at me trying to read my expression, my mind. A shiver sped down my spine as he started caressing my back. I turned to stare back at him not expecting anything. Until he kissed me and his lips stayed on mine for what seemed like a forever. It was so tender. caring and soft. Just like what I hoped my first kiss to be like. When it was over I knew everything had just changed between us and that made me a bit scared.

The author's comments:
This is how i wanted my first kiss to be like.

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Holycobra said...
on Dec. 10 2009 at 8:43 pm
Holycobra, Chelsea, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"How did they find me? What do they want from me? OOOH!Orange juice!"

Same here about the first kiss, mine was on a bus.

on Dec. 10 2009 at 4:51 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

thanks!! i had my first kiss not romantic at all

forever2193 said...
on Dec. 10 2009 at 9:49 am
wow!! i loved this-i also agree with the author that i would want my first kiss to be like that

so romantic! :)

on Nov. 18 2009 at 7:56 am
Alberta Kukaj SILVER, Congers, New York
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wow! that was amazing keep going with this story

on Nov. 2 2009 at 6:20 pm
JordanNicole SILVER, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Love is strange, powerful, and sneaky. You won\'t know it until you find it...and when you have it, never let it go!\" ~JordanNicole

Don't feel bad blueroses, I'm 16 and I haven't had my first kiss yet. It will happen someday; for both of us. I really like this piece...

aliciaturner said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 3:31 pm
I wish my first kiss was like that..Great imagery

on Oct. 27 2009 at 8:35 am
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be" -anonymous

LOL. I'm 14 and I haven't been kissed. Don't fret. It will happen soon.

on Oct. 11 2009 at 1:14 pm
accio-sarcasm, Nunya Effin Business, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"To the well organized man, death is but the next great adventure."
-Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone

"There's nothing wrong with you. There's just a lot wrong with the world you live in."
-Chris Colfer

Better than my first kiss... in 1st grade with a guy who now is fat and always sweaty... can that not count??? Check out my dream 1st kiss in my article "First Kiss" please!

on Oct. 5 2009 at 10:19 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i wish my first kiss was like that but like emma in the hallway at school. not really romantic at all. this was really good.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 6:07 pm
emmatheballerina GOLD, Tacoma, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"It is not in our greatest glory in never falling, but in rising everytime we fall"
"I use to want the words "she tried" on my tombstone, now I want "she did it"

wow. That would have been really awkward!! I pray for you for when you get ur real first kiss. Hopefully it will be better than mine!

on Oct. 1 2009 at 3:23 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

I got my fisrt kiss on a dare to kiss my crush. lol. But when I get my first romantic kiss i want it to be like this

on Oct. 1 2009 at 11:07 am
emmatheballerina GOLD, Tacoma, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"It is not in our greatest glory in never falling, but in rising everytime we fall"
"I use to want the words "she tried" on my tombstone, now I want "she did it"

that was really good. I wish my first kiss was like that. But mine was some ackward thing in the hall way at school! ya, real romantic I know!

on Sep. 25 2009 at 6:59 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

I LOVE THIS!!! That is such a good article! I felt like I was there in the moment. Keep going!!!!

~blueroses~ said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 5:39 pm
~blueroses~, Summerville, South Carolina
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haha! you're welcome, & good luck!!!

on Sep. 23 2009 at 9:45 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

Thank you. I already had my first kiss I wish I could remember it. It was so long ago. But it's Ironic cuz im 13 too! lol

~blueroses~ said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 6:31 pm
~blueroses~, Summerville, South Carolina
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I love it!

i want my first kiss to be like that...

i wish i'd had mine already!!!! god im 13 and i feel AWFUL that i havent been kissed yet.

but really, it was AWESOME! (:

BookLOver808 said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 12:20 pm
loved it!!!!

on Sep. 21 2009 at 10:04 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

Thank you for liking this peice.

Katy Perry said...
on Sep. 21 2009 at 6:53 pm
i agree very nice. and u should really right more

on Sep. 21 2009 at 1:58 pm
bittybabe92 SILVER, St.louis, Missouri
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this is nice