Oh Thy Beloved

March 29, 2017
By NicholasCambron BRONZE, Paragould , Arkansas
NicholasCambron BRONZE, Paragould , Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"Life without love isn't life at all"


Oh how tis goddess of beauty loves thee

Whith hair like silk and eyes of midday blue

Admiring you brings me wonderful glee

The love I have for you will stick like glue

Your radiant smile shines like the bright night

A voice like this must be an enchantress

Every word you say has some sort of light

A day without you has a lot of stress

Oh my beloved thou are fantastic

With love such as yours I shall never roam

You make every day enthusiastic

When with you I feel as if I'm at home

Thou hath made life a sweet experience

The joy caused by thee is greatly immense


The author's comments:

This poem is about my girlfriend. She is my absolute everything and couldnt make it without her.


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on Mar. 30 2017 at 10:11 pm
camogirl6sic6,
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Dude this a great sonnet! You have a great talent, your sonnet is better than mine. I love your sonnet!

Angelina said...
on Mar. 30 2017 at 9:52 pm
I love it!! The poem is amazing, don't ever stop writing!!! You are very talented!!!

on Mar. 30 2017 at 9:45 pm
Terror22 BRONZE, Paragould, Arkansas
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This is awesome Nick. I absolutely love it, and it makes me happy you have such a loving relationship. This poem is fantastic; love love love it.

IshaBuste said...
on Mar. 30 2017 at 9:32 pm
This is really good. The way the words fit perfectly together in the sonnet and the way you express your love for your girlfriend. I love it




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