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A Gift from Heaven MAG

November 15, 2016
By xSakhix SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
xSakhix SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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The sudden release of tears from the sky
slowly seeping through the deep crevices
sweeping the warmth of the clouds. The wind sighs
rubber boots squeak out sounds like kisses
Carefully skittering through puddles of shame
Coursing and glazing over the earth’s skin.
Mimicking hidden emotions not tame
drizzling on dry hearts and nurturing akin
Jagged lightning pierced heart-shattered hope
sharp pain distorted vision, broken glass
prickling thoughts beyond the mind’s scope
Slipping and sliding on thoughts hard to grasp
The solution to problems beyond ken
Ray of sun illuminating heaven

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on Dec. 13 2018 at 9:00 am
kristjanscott BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Atticus,he was real nice...."

"Most people are,sout,when you finally see them"

-To Kill A Mockingbird,HAPPER LEE

I love how you compare your object sounds to differnt objects.

LEL737 SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2018 at 11:59 pm
LEL737 SILVER, Port Washington, New York
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Favorite Quote:
What will you do with your one wild and precious life? - Mary Oliver

I like your rhyme scheme, I never have the patience for that but you're super at it!

Kchi said...
on Nov. 21 2016 at 7:59 am
Very impressive

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