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Not sure....

March 29, 2013
By -Char SILVER, Apple Valley, California
-Char SILVER, Apple Valley, California
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I see now that the circumstances of ones birth are irrelevant. It is what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are" -Mewtwo


I don't know what to do here
I'm confused, you see?
I'm living in fear
Just put me out of my misery..

If not,
Then I'll do it for you
I know what you're thinking: "great Scott!"
Maybe I'll become a ghost..BOO

Yeah, I know I'm depressing
But I wasn't always like this
Used to be funny. Like tomska and bing
Right right now life's a swing and miss

I might quit life, I might not.
Just please don't put me on the spot.

-Char


The author's comments:
Tomska and bing are funny YouTube stars.

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on Jun. 5 2013 at 7:04 pm
CrayCrayThePhotographer SILVER, Apple Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
We're all Perfectly unPerfect for a Reason

Sweetheart, Your a great poet. Never change. Yes this on is depressing, but still great. like you. ~K

-Char SILVER said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 6:05 pm
-Char SILVER, Apple Valley, California
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I see now that the circumstances of ones birth are irrelevant. It is what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are" -Mewtwo

Thanks, ill work on it:)

on Apr. 6 2013 at 10:38 am
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
67 articles 0 photos 211 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

Your piece is frank, right out of your head. But it's my suggestion that you might want to refine it and improve on it, or probaly wor dit better to make a more captivating poem. This piece reflects a hint of writing that can be greatly developed. But keep going!!!