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My one true love.

March 25, 2013
By -Char SILVER, Apple Valley, California
-Char SILVER, Apple Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I see now that the circumstances of ones birth are irrelevant. It is what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are" -Mewtwo

She was a girl
He was a boy
He makes her head swirl
She gives him joy

They would always talk,
both day and night.
Like a hawk,
Their hearts take flight.

They fell in love.
Now their spirits are..
Somewhere above.
Together they'll go far

I used to think love was fake
But this feeling I just can't shake.

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on Apr. 4 2013 at 8:35 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Something about this line, 'Like a hawk,
Their hearts take flight.' really hit me hard. I absolutely love that line, priceless! There is something about this that I can't explain that just makes me read the poem over and over. Maybe it's the word choices and the rythym or maybe it's that you just wrote this so well! I'm going to think about this one for awhile.. you're great! Xx!