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My First Concert

January 6, 2013
By WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Suddenly darkness consumes everything.
I feel the building tension around me.
In the silence we all sit listening.
But there’s nothing to hear, nothing to see.

But then I hear a massive explosion.
And deafening screams ring inside my ears.
A fire bursts in a huge eruption.
What in the world is going on in here?

Then three angels descend from high above.
I've never seen such a beautiful sight.
Together they sing out with songs of love,
basking in all of the heavenly light.

Indeed this concert was like no other.
I must come back someday for another.

The author's comments:
This is about the Jonas Brothers concert I went to in seventh grade. Yes, I admit it: I think the Jonas Brothers are adorable. No shame! ;)

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