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Love at First Sight

March 11, 2011
By ckycky22 GOLD, Centerville, Iowa
ckycky22 GOLD, Centerville, Iowa
11 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hello sun! You look like a unicorn!!"

She wonders straight, from point A to point B.

Avoids all contact, not being noticed.

Unwilling, unknowing, of what should be,

the boy stands blankly, as if being menaced.

She catches his eyes, he stares unaware.

she knows he's gazing, and picks up her stride.

He panics and dreads, sends up a small prayer,

asking for help, or to give him a guide.

He's clenching his fists, and holding his fears.

He walks up to her, a nervous pale wreck.

Stops inches away, his hope reappears.

A humble hey, followed by a bold peck,

surely this couple will be forever

shall never forget this first endeavor

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Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 14 2011 at 10:59 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

You know when I read your comments on my poems, I had to come and check out yours and I'm glad I did . . . People dont take the time to read and comment but I must tell you that you have a gift, I could literally imagine this as I was reading it which is what a good writer does, let the words paint a talking picture in your imagination! Very good!