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My Child, My Son

March 10, 2010
By GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

The light of the sun percing
through the window.
I think of you.
The roaring of the waves,
I miss you.
How I wish theses days
would just fly by.

With no worry in my mind
Knowing your fine.
My dear child you are so blind
Because you are next in line
For the time of your life.

How I would kill to be there
to see your smile.
How could I dare
leave you alone
In this world you barley know.

I must belive in you.
You are now a grown man.
You are with lou
And my three grandchildren.
Which are such a delight.
They are now living
Such a wonderful life.

The light of the sun percing
Through the window.
I think of you.
The roaring of the waves
I miss you.

You are my son.
And I love you.
I hope you know thats true.
Please dont forget this poem
I did for you.

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on May. 13 2010 at 12:11 am
Bonianlethalxx2 SILVER, Concord, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Hard work defeats talent when talent fails to work hard" Rene Maher (unknown original)

Nice job, i really liked it. I look forward to your future work : ]

on May. 11 2010 at 3:08 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe I love it:) It almost made me tear up

on Mar. 31 2010 at 3:24 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

Awhh! This really is heart-warming! Congratulations! This was so well written! If you get the chance, may you please comment on my work, too? Thanks so much!

bgrizzly_21 said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 11:22 pm
I though it was very nice and it came from the heart:)

Milo! said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 3:23 pm
This is a great poem because it's something we can all relate to at one point or another.

You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.