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Not what I need

February 7, 2010
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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I'll close my eyes
and I'll push you away
praying your face
will be lost in the fray

You're just what I want
but you're not what I need
while my heart's saying yes
my head starts to impead

You know only my name
but it just doesn't fit
when there's so much of you
that I'll have to forget

© Austin K., Studio City, CA

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Dessometrics BRONZE said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 10:22 am
Dessometrics BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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currently seeking

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this is beautiful
love2run GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 9:59 pm
love2run GOLD, Star Valley, Wyoming
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&quot;I failed my way to success.&quot; Thomas Edison<br /> &quot;What kind of crazy nut would spend two or three hours a day just running?&quot; Pre<br /> &quot;A ship in harbor is safe, but that&#039;s not what ships are built for.&quot; John Shedd

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wow, i love it!!! great job! :D
VampiericRain GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 4:25 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

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You never cease to amaze me. Wonderful job.
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:00 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

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again....your work never disappoints me. yet another great piece :) :) bravo!!
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 2:43 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
loveibanez BRONZE said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 2:53 pm
loveibanez BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
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&quot;When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on!&quot; -Ben Franklin

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Love it, love it, love it. This totally describes me! and its very well written, simple but totally gets the point across