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The river in her eyes.

November 29, 2009
By matt06291 SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
matt06291 SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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see the river flowing. in her eyes.

its bright as blue. amazing.... like the sky

it keeps flowing. and always keeps going.

i'd loved her all this time without her even knowing

people try to pollute it, and boys tried to puruit it

but she just ignored it, and continue to mute it

at times it may get bumpy over the rocks.

but she stays strong and she never stops.

even at hard times when things get hot

she never dries up. all the past is forgot

she saw alot of fish. and she never knew which

she made one wish. to have one to live her life with

there's so much fish in the sea. so much for her to see

but i jumped right in, and then she chose... me

The author's comments:
My last piece was more explanational on how i felt in my past situation, this one is more of a nice poem that views love in a different prespective.

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on Dec. 18 2009 at 7:05 pm BRONZE, Murray, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"The closer we are to danger the farther we are from harm"
-Pippen, The Lord of the Rings

That is really amazing! Not much else I can say.

on Dec. 17 2009 at 1:40 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe i love it:) Nice flow

on Dec. 16 2009 at 5:37 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

Love it! It really creates a picture in one's mind, doesn't it? >.<