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September 28, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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I’m feeling like I’m wishing
Like a part of me is breaking
like a change is quickly coming
like my hands will not stop shaking

I’m feeling like its hard
And its not worth all this pain
I’m feeling like I need to cry
I wish that it would rain.

I can’t say what I’m feeling
I’m not quite sure what’s wrong
I need to start the healing
Play this sweet sad song

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

The author's comments:
I wrote this like last year and I just found it. But it's nice, it has a pretty ring to it I think... I don't know.
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cross.fire BRONZE said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 4:58 pm
cross.fire BRONZE, Monroe, Louisiana
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"Love is the fire and hope is what burns."

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How many times have I felt this? It's awesome to know I'm not the only one.