New York City

September 28, 2009
By bluebug77 SILVER, Alpine, Utah
bluebug77 SILVER, Alpine, Utah
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Vendors selling,
People yelling,
The streets are alive once more.

Cell phones ringing
Students dreaming
Many opportunities are in store.

Sirens wailing
Big ships sailing
Watching the statue in the bay.

Money spending
Postcard sending
Gee I wish I could stay.


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on Dec. 1 2011 at 4:57 pm
my_poetry BRONZE, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Well, I must say I love your poem! I've lived in NY my whole life and you've captured this NY spirit so wonderfully.

on Dec. 1 2011 at 2:16 pm
teacuppoetry GOLD, Lancashire, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The world is full of obvious things which nobody by any chance ever observes- Sherlock Holmes

I love this !

Skreid said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 4:13 pm
Exactly how I feel about the big Apple.  I'm going back after I finish high school. :)

on May. 17 2011 at 10:19 pm
nikkigonefishin GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
" A smile is worth a thousand words"
" The purpose of the writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself."- Albert Camus

AWESOME!! I would like 2 go 2 NY and ur imagery made me picture NY the way I hav imagined.

croww said...
on Feb. 26 2011 at 2:15 pm
ive been to new york and u nailed it!! you really captured the true essence of new york life

on Nov. 22 2010 at 4:41 pm
MeganElizabeth BRONZE, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
They who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
~Edgar Allan Poe

I LOVE this! It makes me want to just spend a day in New York and people watch and observe everything. 

on May. 8 2010 at 10:20 am
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which
procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt
i'm F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

this is so amazingly ironic cuz my 8th grade class just got back from a week long trip there last week it was so amazing but texas will always be my fav<333 i loved you r poem

AlexSerino said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 9:18 am
AlexSerino, Saugus, Massachusetts
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I Love New York City :D

connellys said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 5:21 pm
While I was reading this poem, I could easily picture New York City, even without reading the title. I was impressed by how well you described what you see, or even think of, when you are in New York, or just hearing of the place. When you said "Watching the statue in the bay," I pictured someone sitting on a park bench in New York, just staring at the Statue of Liberty as the sun sets. Also, when you say, "Vendors selling, People yelling, The streets are alive once more," it reminds me of almost every movie that takes place in New York City. People are always rushing and yelling, and vendors are always, always selling materials. I really enjoyed the way your poem had a unique flow. I also liked how you implied you were only on a vacation, when you said, "Gee I wish I could stay." You did a fantastic job, and I hope you write more.

on Oct. 12 2009 at 4:15 pm
ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
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awww, i'll gladly trade my NYC residence with your place in UT! nice job.


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