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Loving Thee

July 22, 2018
By sqeaky3260 BRONZE, San Jose, California
sqeaky3260 BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Thou hath captured mine heart with the tenderest of songs;

Through toil, through fire, through agony, I have cross’d,

To see thy smile upon my suit and wrongs.

Without thy love I wander through life lost,

Like a sparrow who hath their nest mislaid,

Like a rose that hath not been bloomed;

I feel as if thy hath put on a facade,

With no feeling, with no cure to this wicked wound,

And only if thou givest thy heart to me

And sing thy sweet melodies for myself alone,

Then thou shalt drag me out of the black sea

Of hellish wonders and dreams to sit by thy throne.

I shall hunt thee as if the art a hart,

Who hath ripped my soul and my sense apart.


The author's comments:

This love sonnet is based off the relationship between Duke Orsino and Countess Olivia at the beginning of Twelfth Night. Duke Orsino has been rejected many times and writes a sonnet to Olivia trying to woo her.


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lucylai said...
on Jul. 29 2018 at 1:08 pm
lucylai, San Jose, California
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Beautifully written!

on Jul. 29 2018 at 12:56 am
A-Writer SILVER, Pleasanton, California
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"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched-they must be felt with the heart."- Helen Keller

Beautiful! The Twelfth Night is an amazing play, and you completely captured it with this sonnet!